Destiny Wings (Prologue)

The Black Winged Angels. Considered a Demon. The White Winged Angels. Considered a blessing. Humans think that way. But what if it were wrong? No Human can answer that question...Or No Human wants to. Humans don't think that way, everything they decide, they think must be true. Have they ever even tried to consider the possibility that the Black wings are a sign of dark peace and the White, a sign of burning anger? I don't even think the Angels them selves know that. Well we shall just see.1

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"Give her back, Please, I love her!" A Black Winged Mother called, helpless to save the only Child she'll ever have.3

"I shall never allow this...thing to live! Its Mother is a Black Wing and it, IT, isn't even considered an Angel! Red what a colour!" A White Winged Man yelled back at the now crying Angel Mother.4

He stormed out the door and flew into the darkness of the night sky, cradling the baby. (I believe this is the one I've been looking for)5

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"Daddy, Who is my Mother?" The little girl asked, staring up at the White Winged Man.7

He shuddered as after three years this question finally came up. He didn't waste any time answering. "Terea, your Mother was a Black Wing, a Demon kind of Angel. Although you may find this hard to believe, that there is such a thing, i assure you its entirely true. She was evil in a way, when you were born she tried to kill you, just because you had White Wings. I, knowing I needed to do something, took you away to here, in the Human world. Now promise your Father one thing...if you ever see your Mother again...kill her"8

Terea's eyes opened wide with those words, but she understood...maybe too well. "I promise"9

After a few hours of wondering around Terea tripped over a branch. She found that when she fell it didn't hurt. She looked down to the ground and found she fell on top of a group of White Mushrooms. Terea struggled to her feet and went to the nearest pond to wash off the Mushrooms scent. As she looked into the reflection she noticed something...her Wings...they were...Red!? Terea rushed back to the Mushrooms and stared at them. She noticed a blue patch on one of them. She slid her finger along the White around the Blue and looked at her finger. It was White.10

Terea then understood a lot of things. Her Wings were never White they were Red and somehow these Mushrooms were an Antidote to whatever had dyed them.11

Before Terea could think anymore she was knocked unconscious and a sack was thrown over her head.12

"This'll make a great improvement to the show!"

Author notes

well i wrote this really fast cuz i wanted to get on with the story later so its not as goowd as it could be...you get the point of the story a bit now anyway...

If you gonna take the time to read this try to comment and tell me what needs "improving" and what you like

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  • Kagamine Rin
    August 4

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    Very good, a nice start to a future story. Hopefully you won't get writer's block like I do on all of my stories. But it's very cute and very interesting...

    ~Rin


    • Wildpaw-Lily
      August 5
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      XD Thanks... But I don't think this is gonna go anywhere... Sorry~ Just haven't had the time or the inspiration to do anything lately..


  • T-Rex
    November 5, 2008
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    Awesome!

    This is a cool story 4 people who like stuff like this!


  • T-Rex
    November 5, 2008
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    yeah chia! awesom


  • Finis
    October 18, 2008

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    the idean i interesting. I think the angel vs demon thing is overdone but with a little inspiration you can pull it of really well. I can`t wait to read the story.

    • Wildpaw-Lily
      October 18, 2008
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      hehe..thx! yea i did pull this out of my head at about midnight so, mhmm. Well I'll try to start the actual thing

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