Danny

"Danny. Danny!!!"1

I hold his black cold hair with my little hands, It wasn’t always like this I want him back.2

I remember the first day I met him, It was only 3 days ago but those were the best days of my life.3

FLASH BACK4

"Rose we have to see the new neighbors get ready, or Ill come up their."5

"Wait Mom."6

We walked over to his house it was so much bigger than ours, even the yard. Mom rang the bell and they all greeted us in, Mom told me to play with the little boy because adults need to talk. I walked in their living room to see the boy, I blushed. He grabbed my hand and shook it."Hi my name is Danny. What’s yours?"7

I really didn’t want to be rude or anything but I had to ask what’s wrong with his voice, Mom or dad don’t have that voice.8

"What’s wrong with your voice?"9

He looked at me then he looked down, but then he raised his head again with a smile.10

"I was going to ask you the same thing. haha."11

I looked at him then put my hands on my hips, he thought I had a weird voise."Whats so weird about my voice, mine is more normaler than yours." 12

The smile went off his face, but then he brought it back on again, I was thinking what now.13

"Oh ya."14

"Oh ya what?" I looked at him to see he was thinking, he had that thinking look.15

"My parents told me about, ac ac accent."16

"What do they do." I looked at him with increase.17

"People talk different because of their accent, So everybody is unique in their own way."18

I smile and site on the floor where he was sitting, he came right after me. We started drawing.19

"So what’s your name boy?"20

"My name is Danny what about you."21

"Rose."My face got red he smiled and started blushing to so I new he was going to say something sweet.22

"Your name is so pretty like....."23

Danny went into a room then did that finger flip to tell me to come in. I walked in the room and saw roses, all different colors. He picked a yellow rose and said to me almost in a whisper.24

"The pretty one. Just like you."25

I blushed then sat down, I looked around the rose to see no thorns. That’s what he must of been doing over their for a while, I sat on a little red seat. 26

"How old are you Danny?"27

"I’m 8 what about you Rose."28

"I’m 6."29

He sat right beside me with more thorn less roses and starter singing a song, It was beautiful. 30

"Who sings the song?"31

"I made it." He had a big smile on his face, you could tell he was proud. I layed down and listened to him sing till I fell asleep.32

"I have a rose for you, Don’t think that it is two. Sorry if I cant get another, But I hope you will take it and keep it for me."33

I could hear him in my dreams, was it love like mom said her and dad have. Or am I just making a new friend.34

I woke up to mom shacking me to wake up, we said goodbye and left. When we got home I went to bed, but it was hard because I could still hear him when I was alone.35

Next Day. I woke up with the sun shinning in my eyes, then ran down the stairs. Milk, eggs, and toast. "Rose, were going to the neighbors house today. So fined your Sunday dress"36

I rose my head in cheer than ate really fast, I had a quick bath then started looking for the dress I wanted to wear. But then I got stuck Yellow or purple, then I remembered he liked yellow. He thought it was pretty like me, I got on the dress and then put up my hair in a bun. with a yellow hat on top, I looked at my hair caramel. Whenever I thought of the color I got hungry for it.37

"Come on mom lets go."38

She put the food away, then we went to the car. I looked out the window to see we were going off road, but I didn’t care I was seeing him. We finally got out of the bush and into the light, I saw him and his family sitting on a blanket. Its just like thoughts paintings that I see at the art place, the car stopped and I started running to him. I jump hoping he would get me, and he did.39

"Rose!"40

"Danny!" Our parents looked at us funny so he put me on the ground.41

"Rose here I got to show you something."42

I look at his eyes than I look at my mom, she nodded her head. I thought it was funny how she could hear everything.43

Me and Danny started walking, I wanted to stop but he said come it was worth it. So that kept me on my feet, we finally got to a hill which he started running over. I took a deep breath and came right after, I looked and went to shock. 44

Roses everywhere I looked at him and he looked at me, I put out my hand and he grabbed it. We started walking down the hill, but at the bottom I saw something. It was a little bench, We sat on it for a long time. He kept singing the song.45

"So Danny what do you call the song?"46

"I call it. A rose for my Rose"47

I blushed then kissed him on the cheek and then hugged him. So whatever people say about love can only happen to the ones that know what it is. Its wrong, you know what love is when you experience it.48

I stop hugging him and looked at his face, he was red. When I say red I mean hot pepper red, but then I looked down to see that I had to stand on the bench to give him a hug and a kiss. That made me feel imbearsed.49

It started getting dark so we started walked back, my mom looked at us and smiled. I walked to her and gave her a hug.50

"Rose its time to go."51

I got up adimadicly and ran and jamp to him to give him a hug and another kiss on the cheek, while he held me up. We walked to our cars and left, threw the off road trail and back to the street. When we got back home it was dark, So I went right to bed after again.52

I woke up to see I went to sleep better, I got on a yellow shirt and skirt and went downstairs to the table, I ate left over breakfast from yesterday. 53

"Mom I’m going to dannies!"54

"Ok! be back at 6!"55

I skipped to hi house, I knocked on the door and Danny answered. 56

"Do you want to go for a walk?"57

"Sure Rose." he smiled and told his parents he was leaving then we left.58

We went to the park and swinged on the swings for a while, then we made sand castles. I looked at the big clock on the park it was 5, So I told Danny I had to go and we left. We started walking across the street when the car came. I didn’t see it coming, I was tying my shoe. Danny pushed me over than got hate himself.59

"Danny!! Danny!!"60

"Rose."61

"What Danny?"62

"Can you sing me the song one last time?"63

"Danny your going to be ok you will sing it lot more times, The person who hit you is calling 911."64

"Can you just sing it to me now anyway then."65

"Ok. I have a rose for you, Don’t think that it is two. Sorry if I cant get another, But I hope you will take it and keep it for me. This rose is my heart. I only give it to the person who loves me."66

"See I added a part do you like it? Its for you."67

"Danny!!! Danny!!!!!!!!"68

He didn’t move, I kissed him on the cheek and kept singing it over and over praying that we will meet together in heaven. 69

"Please wait for me."

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  • SaccharineMini
    October 16, 2008

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    Oh my gosh...how sad. I was hoping for a happy ending, but the story was very cute. A few errors, but other than that very well done.
    Good Luck.
    -Renesme-


  • GreenEnvyGirl
    October 15, 2008
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    imbariesd is embarrassed and that is that thanks for reading and hope you like it


  • GreenEnvyGirl
    October 15, 2008
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    59 is hit not hate sorry

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