Twinkles, A Fairy

Twinkles, A Fairy1

Once upon a time in Fairyland there was a young fairy named Twinkles who thought she was not very good at being a fairy.  She tried to do the magic and mysterious things which were expected of her but nothing seemed to work out the way it was supposed to.2

Every time she would sprinkle fairy dust to make the magic happen, everything would get covered with SAND!!!  All of nature’s creatures around her would scold her, tell her she was a bad fairy and would try to avoid her as much as possible.3

And there was the time that the farmers’ pig, Elmo wanted her to make him into a handsome prince among hogs....but as soon as Twinkles waved her magic wand Elmo was transformed into a toad.  Now this really upset Elmo because he was always having to hop out of the way of the other pigs’ feet.   Twinkles did manage to get him transformed back into his former self but not without the help of the wise old fairy, Habatha.  4

And how about the many times she tried the ordinary task of making the flowers bloom each morning…… only to have them droop and not bloom until days end, and sometimes not at all??!!5

Now this was all very embarrassing to Twinkles, always having to get help to perform everyday common fairy tasks. These were things all the other fairies did without a problem.6

“I just can’t be a good fairy, I guess”, she said to herself.  “I might as well find another way to live”.  And she began to weep, for she really loved the fairy life.  “What can I do, though”, she said sadly.  7

As she sat alone on a tree stump she began to feel sleepy so she smoothed a place on the grass so she could lie down for a nap.8

She went sound asleep and before long was deep into a dream.  She dreamed that she heard a little voice beside her saying, “Twinkles, Twinkles, help me.  Please help me.  My wings are damaged beyond repair, I can no longer fly”.   She looked and saw that it was a tiny insect speaking.9

The dream seemed so real, she almost thought it was really happening but she told the fragile little insect to go away, that she couldn’t help him.  He would just have to deal with it himself or get another fairy to help him.  But the little insect just sat there, nearly unable to move, weak from struggling to get closer to Twinkles.  10

“Please?”, asked the little bug weakly.  He sounded so sad and weak and Twinkles tried to think of a way to help him.  My wings, perhaps he can use my wings, she thought, and after much effort she was able to remove them from her slender back.  She looked longingly at them, wishing she could put them to use but alas, by now she had given up nearly all hope of being a real fairy.  She offered them to the little bug who looked at her in surprise.11

“Oh, no”, he said, “ I cannot take your wings, you’ll need them yourself.  All fairies need wings”.  12

She loved her wings and caressed them wistfully, so light and fragile looking, yet so strong.  “Take them, please”, she said.  “I’m not a good fairy and you can put them to much better use.  You need them.  Please accept them with my blessing”.  With that, she placed them gently upon his back, adjusting them a bit until they fit perfectly.  13

“Oh, Twinkles, thank you.  They’re the best wings in the world and you’re the best fairy in the world”, he said with a smile and tears in his eyes.  “I shall never forget your kindness and generosity”.  He gave her a big hug, a kiss on the cheek, and flew away with his lovely new wings.14

Twinkles slept restfully after that, awakening to a strange new feeling to her body.  She sat up, stretched and leaned back against the log.  But what….?   There was something pressing slightly against her back, not the log, this was a softer feeling.  I must have slept crooked on my wings, she thought to herself. She stood up and looked backwards, trying to see her wings. 15

What she saw was the most beautiful pair of fairy wings she had ever seen and there beside her was the wise fairy Habatha who had helped her out of so many dilemmas.  They both looked in awe at the beauty of Twinkles new wings, all shiny and silky.  Twinkles was speechless, not understanding what was happening.  16

Habatha gave her a gentle smile and began to explain the emergence of the wings.17

“You see, my dear”, said the wise old fairy, you have done a very special deed today.  You gave up something you treasured, to help someone who needed help.  To give of yourself in such an unselfish way is one of the highest deeds we can do.  That poor little insect would not have lasted much longer with just his broken wings.  You gave up a treasured possession for his benefit, allowing him to live a normal life.  Those wings will take him far and will always remain special to him because of your kindness”.18

“But it was just a dream, I’m not a good fairy, Habatha, I’m almost useless in Fairyland.  These wings should be given to a fairy who is good at what she does, not wasted on a fairy like me.”   19

“Don’t be so hard on yourself, Twinkles, try them”.  And with a flick of her wings she flew away, leaving Twinkles alone in her amazement.  20

Just then the little bug from her dream flew past her, then began to fly in circles around her.  She watched in astonishment, barely believing her eyes.  It hadn’t been a dream after all.  21

“Come on, Twinkles, come fly with me”, he coaxed happily.  Twinkles spread her wings and began to fly.22

She flew higher than she’d ever been before, then swooped down again.  The new wings were working wonderfully.  She flew around for a few minutes, then realizing what time it was, she thought she’d give the fairy powers a try.  The sun was beginning to lower itself in the sky and soon would be replaced by the moon.  What could she do quickly?!23

A sunset, that’s what I’ll do, I’ll see if  I can start now so that more people can enjoy its beauty.  She raised her magic wand and flew towards the horizon.  The sky changed from blue to pink and gold, the shadows grew longer and within minutes there for all to see was the most beautiful sunset of all time.24

“It worked!!!”. She shouted in happy amazement. And the sun seemed to stand still, holding on to the beauty as long as it could.25

From that day forward, Twinkles helped the flowers bloom, the sun rise and set and her fairy dust was the purest of all.  At last, Twinkles was the good fairy she had always hoped to be.  And it happened because of her thoughtfulness and kindness. 26

By Granny Goose27

April 2, 200528

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Hmmm.... just another fairy tale

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  • bowmore bill
    August 12, 2006
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    child friendly

    enjoyed it very much, probably as much as any ghild.


  • AKM Takayuki
    August 7, 2006

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    Great Morals!

    This is so awesome! Twinkles sure is a great role for kids and they could certainly relate to character in one way or another. Great job! I gave you 4 out of 5 on language only because there were some sentences that kinda were weird to me. I apologize for not stating which ones, I was too into the story! Otherwise, it was great.

  • oldbill68
    June 7, 2006
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    Would keep the attention of any child.

    Dear Granny Goose, really enjoyed Twinkles a Fairy, well written and some great ideas.
    Tried my hand at fairy Stories a couple of years ago, coincidently the one and only one that i wrote was called Tinkle and the magic cap, tinkle is an Elf.


  • antique
    May 12, 2005
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    awwwwwwww this is beautiful .. and it had such a wonderful message woven into the story .. very nicely done .. I enjoyed reading it .. thanks for sharing and keep the ink flowing

    ~Aimee

  • Gosia
    May 2, 2005
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    Aww this is so lovely!! I'm not really 'into' fairy stories anymore and i'm not quite sure why I read this, but I'm glad I did!! Beautifully written, and with a very good moral point!! This is really heartwarming and just generally... lovely!! There were two things I could be critical about; the repetition of "so she" in this sentence tarnishes it for me a little, 'As she sat alone on a tree stump she began to feel sleepy so she smoothed a place on the grass so she could lie down for a nap.' Perhaps you could use 'in order to..' or something else so you aren't repeating yourself? Also, Im not sure if I'm right on this grammatical point but I feel this line 'adjusting them a bit until they fit perfectly.' should say 'fitted' instead of 'fit'. However, these minor points aside, it's a brilliant tale - thanks for writing it!
    Love Crystal x

  • Jumbie
    April 25, 2005
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    That was so sweet! I love fairy tales! I feel like a little girl again!
    I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings!


  • Utok Bulinaw
    April 25, 2005
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    Oh you make me feel like a little girl again. I like fairytale stories and this is one of the best fairytales I have ever read. By the way, Tinny Moo is my little cousin. She just lives at the backdoor. She's the daughter of my Papa's youngest brother. I am the eldest grandchild in the family. Just got married, no baby yet but I would love to have very soon. Thank you so much for the comments. Hugs, Eris

  • Ilovethesky
    April 24, 2005
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    really great

    Wow. That is one of the bestest fairy tales I have ever read. I am so happy when I get to read fairy tales because they are my favourite type of story ever. I love fairies and I am so happy that Twinkles got some new beautiful wings and got her fairy powers to work. She was so nice to give her wings to the little poor insect. I loved reading this story.

    from annie

  • jeaneileen
    April 11, 2005
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    A beautiful, well-written fairytale with a good moral within! I enjoyed reading this story and think any child would stay interested to find out how it ends. I did--and I am not a child! lol Made me wish that I had grandchildren to read it to! Thanks for sharing your talent!


  • Amoreena
    April 11, 2005
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    I love this story! If my kids were still small I would read it to them. And such a beautiful moral as well. Thank you for your lovely talent & generous spirit!


  • naravin
    April 11, 2005
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    So cute. =)


  • Sherry gold member
    April 2, 2005
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    Hey Dee,
    You have a wonderful piece here its beautifuly written very touching to read its lovely and speaks to my heart. This is good for not only children but adults as well. Because of its message of love and giving. How it is so true one can feel so bad about who they are and yet really find self worth in helping someone else and the blessings of thier thankfulness.
    Dee, this is really beautiful, and touching, all you need now is a picture of a fairy offering her wings to the insect. If you knew of anyone who draws pictures. Love and hugs


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    April 2, 2005
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    Awwwwe, Granny I feel like a little girl again This is so sweet. You did a wonderful job on this. I'm bookmarking this. One day I'll have grandchildren to read it too This is very well done. A true classic.

    ~Lyrical


  • Anna Goose
    April 2, 2005
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    Aww.. This is cute Grams. Where do you come up with these? It must be that Mother Goose genes we have. Might want to change the font color, its a little hard on the eyes.

    You should make a new contest about sharing. Might be cute to see what the kitties will write.
    O.. Do you like my new name?
    hugs

    Edited on Apr 02, 5:14 p.m. because ''.

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