Imagination Land is a world with fields and water all around.You lay upon a soft sheet of incredibly soft material,curling your toes in the comfort.You slowly float above soft flowing rivers where fairies fly above with a colorful glow over their soft skin.You float on your soft sheet of softness through a gentle and cold mist above a field where little baby dragon roam playfully as the sun spreads a pink and orange glitter across the sky in it's eternal sunset that always stayed.Yet you don't always have to lay
upon your sheet.1
My Story:2
Mak was a short elf who was about eleven years old.He danced in the field of flowers that tickled his angles as his toes sunk into the soft ground.Mak looked up at a mother dragon,whose large wings spread wide away from her long,shiny scaled body.Suddenly she swooped down,lifting Mak.3
She set him on her back.He held tight onto her scales as she carried him through the mist that tickled cold and wet upon his skin,dripping off his chin and onto his goosebumped arms.4
Mak closed his eyes and slowly rolled off the dragon,spinning through the mist.The cold moist water against his skin as he twirled down.Then Mak suddenly plumbed into his soft sheet and slowly drifted under the group of fairies.They all gently sat on Mak,giggling and flying,spreading their sparkly glitter.5
Mak laughed as the sheet set upon the water like a boat.He felt the waves under the sheet.Gently rolling upon his back again.It felt as if his back were being gently rubbed.Mak jumped off the sheet-boat and onto the sandy beach.He sunk his feet into the warm sand,sending a blanket of warmth wrapping around his legs.6
Mak rolled in the sand.The sand moved like the waves,each sending a warm dry and heavy wave tingling upon Mak's skin.He crawled off the beach and ran to the strawberry fields.7
Mak rolled down the fields of short pink grass.As he playfully reached the bottom he picked a few strawberrys and chewed them.Their sweet juice flowing out as he sunk his teeth into them.8
Mak looked around as his sheet lifted him and slowly took him out of his imagination and now he was again an eleven year old boy at school...but he could escape there again whenever he wanted.
THE END
A contest entry
- Create Your Own World by FallenShade.
1100 points, ended November 25, 2008, 8 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like your description. It is very "Soft." (You used the word or a variation of it, six times in three sentences.) I enjoy the thought of an eternal sunset, that just happens to be my favorite time of day.
This is very well written! And the story is adorable. I like the idea of the sheet boat, it is something I've never heard before; very refreshing.
Minus some grammatical errors, this was an excellent write! Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
-Kat-
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I like it! Keep going!
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awww Your a Good writter
Love,
Your Wife <3 -
This was pretty good! I enjoyed the dragon and the strawberry fields. I am also a sucker for a story with an elf in it, since they are very rare most of the time. I did see grammar errors and spelling errors in a couple places, but every story has one or two. lol It was a good write, very descriptive, and creative! keep up the good work!



