Revenge (This piece was not written by me but a boy by the name of Justin Hardy)

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Revenge is an element which builds up in you when someone does something hurtful to your people. This wedge to seek and destroy the person that did this consumes every shred of sanity that you own. You feel the need to get even, but you never would feel this rage normally.2

Never have you felt such an intense feeling of anger and hatred. No one can remove these feelings, not even the ones you love the most. The wedge drives you to seek down this evil person who harmed you or your familiy, even your friends. You can't do what he did, no, you have to make him feel twice as much pain. 3

Never will you be the same. Inside, your mind will never be right. Never will you feel right. If you should ever come across a shred of your sanity, take it in hope that maybe, just maybe you could go back to your old life.4

Friends and family will try to end your out of control thirst for revenge, under any circumstances. They will reach in and rip out your thirst for revenge.5

They will accidentally take out any hope for normality that you had left.6

This leaves you hollow and alone. Whose fault is it? Only your own.7

Then you shall never be the same. All that's left is a hollow shell of yourself and what you used to be is only a memory. Under your skin is still thirst for sweet revenge. This horrible virus has no antidote. Once it is in you, it can never be removed. It can't be destroyed.8

Evil fills you up to the core. It seeps inside you and won't go away. You may find out how to get it out. Revenge has never rang so true.9

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  • amanda vampiress silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    Wow, this was pretty powerful and very true! It is very well written, and explained thoroughly. I agree entirely on your concept of revenge, it will consume anything. I thought this was a good read, so keep up the good work!