From the diary of Cristine...

I still think about Kelsey. The baby that would've been my daughter but never got a chance at life. I guess I just didn't want her to live a life like mine, filled with crazy addictions, foster homes and the house for crazy people. Maybe someday when I'm older I can name my real daughter Kelsey. She can be the spirit of the first Kelsey but even better. James just didn't love her like I did, so I had no choice.1

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  • amanda vampiress
    October 15, 2008
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    This caught my attenion. The first part was sad, about her loosing her daughter, but I got a little confused towards the end of the paragraph. when you wrote ...'I had no choice'... that kind of makes me think that the baby didn't die of regular causes. I am interested to see what you would make of this. Good luck, it is a good start!


    • MorbidCupcake
      October 15, 2008
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      Thank you XD
      It was meant to confuse you into wanting to find out more.