“What do you mean my room is taken?!” Lilly yelled at the woman at the front desk.1
“I am sorry Miss” Said the lady behind the desk.2
Lilly signed and turned around to the door, she wondered why her car was suddenly at the front of the building.3
“Wait I was dropped off?” she narrowed at the car in front of her.4
She looked up to the windows of the entire house above her.5
Darren hid his gun when the woman started to look around for him.6
“That bitch knows fuck!” Darren said. He moved his black hair out of his green eyes to see if she was still trying to find him.7
Lilly opened the car open door and closed it again she grabbed her gun in the side of her dress and pointed it at the windows.8
Darren eye’s widened has he saw the gun in her hands.9
“Fuck” Darren tried to grab his gun but a bullet just missed his head, Darren blinked with shocked.10
“Damn it I miss” Lilly said moving behind the car.11
"Bitch!"Darren yelled and tryed to get out of the room.12
Lilly saw that it was him. 13
"Why does he do this?" She asked her seft.14
Author notes
I hope it good lol it's my first action story ever XD
Really what do you think ?
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I think you just confused my brain...oww now it hurts... meh I dont feel like doing anything that happy today... "Fuck" X3
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Woah! Nice. You shure it's your first action story?XD That was great! Go Lilly, go!!! Killlll him! XD Nice story.
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Lol Thanks Sis!!! yer it my frist Action XD i need to write more lol Xd
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Haha! Kill Darren! Mwahahahaaha! Great action story.
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Lilly!! Yay!! Let's kill Darren! *blasts Darren's head off* Ooops, I ruined the story... *revives Darren* Ok, now you can continue!! xD
Nice story!!
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hehehe!
LOL!
Go Lilly! XD FUnny and actiony! Yay!!! 
Hehehe! 
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Lilly? Lilly? Are you mocking us???!!!.... Or... hehehe...
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Lol nice ... Lilly Xd
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