A Spring Kitsune Kiss

I remember the day I met my first friend. It was snowing as the cherry blossoms held the snow upon their nimble branches. I was six years old as I sat under that snowy tree, I was waiting for my brother to come home but as usual he never did. 1

I remember how a silver fox came up to me and sniffed my slipper covered foot in curiosity. I smiled at it and weakly patted its soft furry head.2

“Hello there, I am Mizuki” I muttered to the fox.3

“I know who you are but do you know who I am?” The fox asked as I sat there in shock. I never knew foxes could talk till that day.4

~*~*~*~*~5

Now here I am ten years later under the same tree but while it is fully blossomed and allowing the sweet smelling blossoms adoring the ground and giving the land a beautiful pink colour. A young man adorned in a red Kimono stood next to me.6

“Such a beautiful Kimono” he suddenly says as I look down at the dark blue kimono with silver Kitsunes adorn it.7

“Why, thank you for the compliment” I say softly with a small bow. He gives me a soft smile as I look up at him.8

“Still formal as ever Mizuki” he says as I look at him in surprise.9

“You know me?” I ask as he smiles and put a finger to my lips.10

“I am the Kitsune that has been watching you for a long time” he says as I continue to stare at him in surprise. He places his hand on his hips and smiles.11

“I thought Kitsunes are tricksters and if they have a human form, they are usually females” I gasped as I look at him. He smiled deviously as he places an arm around y shoulders.12

“Well some of us are tricksters, I know I can be at times, especially when people try to hurt you” He says as I simply nod. “Also, I didn’t want to be a female cause that would be wrong for me to express my feelings, hence why I am a male”13

“I see and you have feelings for a girl?” I ask as he smiles.14

“Yep, you. Despite the fact that I followed you for sixteen years, I was always remembering the first day we actually met” He says as the blossoms fell from the tree. I continue to look out into the distance at the lone mountain which I travel to so I collect flowers for the markets on the weekend.15

“Really, why am I so special?” I ask as he smiles and drapes his arms on my shoulders.16

“Since you are a unique woman and I always find that quality attractive in woman” He says as I look at him in interest. He gently pulls me to him in a warm embrace. “I will always watch over you and protect you from any harm that threatens to happen” he adds as I nod and return the embrace.17

“Winter is our first meeting, Spring is our first romance, what will summer bring?” I ask as he continues to hold on.18

“Our first child” he says as I look at him in surprise.19

“Are you serious?” I ask as he laughs.20

“That or we bind ourselves to each other, who knows” he says as I smile. I felt his lips on mine as the sun slowly sunk into the distance, illuminating the lovers. Their shadows reflecting on the grass in the form of a girl and a Kitsune.

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  • Luckyk
    October 12, 2008

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOO kisses kisses **shudders** Great piece. I enjoyed it muchly especially the kiss...Keep up the good work.


  • Friesian
    October 12, 2008

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    AWwwwwwwww!!!

    This is so awesome! The end was perfect, the beginning was beautiful, and the middle was spectacular! Wow! It was so cute and gorgeous! You really captured the true essence of the kitsune! I was very dazzled by the scenery! Excellent job of taking a prompt and molding it into a wonderful story! I LOVED it! Your words are beautiful!
    Keep on writing! And thank you so much for entering my contest!

    -Lissy