Hello, I am Bob. Every year at this time, October 31. I am asked why I do what I do, and every time I simply state "Why not?" 1
I walk down the street at 10 at night. Why not? 2
I walk into a resturant. Why not? 3
I look around and find a nice looking girl. Why not? 4
I walk up to her and start talking to her. Why not? 5
When her check comes I pay for it. Why not? 6
She invites me to her home and I say "It'd be my plseasure." Why not? 7
We walk in to her home I lock the door. Why not? 8
She comes up to me and holds me tight. I pull out my knife and plunge it deep into her side. She looks up at me with pleading eyes and says "Why?" I look down and calmly reply "Why not?" 9
Author notes
Here's my user name Joe-Pena, I hope you have good luck with your contest. =)
A contest entry
- All Hallows eve - scare me. (or not.) by Melli.
100 points, ended November 2, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Interesting!!!
Inspiring -
ive seen this before in a contest! and i love it
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Very good I loved reading this. It's very interesting the way the whole mood changes toward the end. Definately unexpected. Thanks for putting it in the contest.
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Just passing on a message, but one of my friends believes you need mental help. just passing on a message.
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Chilling, creepy, with a dark turn of events. Hooks the reader and holds them tight. Quite... disturbing, in fact. Now, I move on to your other stories. He he.
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Nicely Done
wow this si slightly creepy i hope your not like him lol but nicely done. -
Wow!
Holy Shit! This is awesome! It gave me chills even though it isn't lengthy.
Why do you say it is not good, when really it is great. I defiantly enjoyed it, but maybe that's just me. I love your whole theme about "Why Not?" Totally intriguing!!! You are an great writer..so please keep writing!!!! 
-Renesme-
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oh, and could you put your top 3 horror movies u like in ur author notes ... or i'll have to DQ you.
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Actually, its quite good. I liked it, it was short and gave me all the information I need to enjoy this story. I think though, it would have been a much better story if you cut out the why and jus said why not? Thanks for enterting and giving me an enjoyable story to read, oh and good luck!!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!
-Melli<33
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