It wasn't too long ago;

It wasn’t too long ago; me and my friend, Mallory, were going to a festival. On the way back, her mom drove by their old house which had some of their worst memories. We kept driving down until we got to a place that actually had any business. I was sitting on the left side of the seat, my friend was in the middle, and her mom’s friend’s daughter (confusing, yes) was on the right. So a car passes, I think nothing of it, then Mallory goes, “Look! Seth just passed by!” 1

Of course I didn’t believe her, we were 20 miles away from our county. After a few seconds, both me and her were telling her mom to turn around so we could scare him. Her mom pulled into the lot where his car was parked, and his mom was inside the building. Mallory and I exited the car and we were crouching up to his. When I got by his window I saw that he was looking at something. I had my face close up to the window; I figured that would scare him. But when he didn‘t even notice that someone was outside his window, I knocked on it. It was extremely funny. He had jumped back, and his eyes had gone wide.2

When he noticed it was me, the girl from science class, he rolled down the window and started a nice conversation, “Why are you in Candy Land?” he asked.3

I explained why we were there, and then Mallory and me left so that we could go home.

Author notes

This nice memory has been stuck in my head, most likely because I really like the guy, and when he moves to Candy Land in about half a month, this will be my favorite memory of us.. So far.

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  • lunarserenityrose
    October 11, 2008

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    That's extremely sweet. I hope you have many more memories that make you smile the way I'm sure this one does.


  • LoneWriter
    October 11, 2008

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    lol! that's cute, I hope you guys do get together. I remember someone doing that to me, except I basically fell off of a chair and literally had a heart attack.

    Mmmm, Candyland, now I'm hungry...

    Good Luck,
    ~LoneWriter

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 5.


    • melissa.
      October 11, 2008
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      Haha, thanks!

      Candyland just makes me want to play the boardgame. :3