In a crib, as a young baby,1
I never gave up the chance,2
to thank my mama, dear to me,3
for everything she gave.4
Her home her life,5
and all she loved...6
The night was clear and,7
bright, and I,8
never thought it would happen.9
She told, "Dear. My love. Please don't forget me.10
Now when I see that I never took11
it for granted.12
I'm thankful. I'm thankful.13
Short, eh!?!?!?14
Thankees peoples!
Hi!!!! Um?
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Right, Angela.......
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It is good but I think it should be a bit longer. I don't think you have to write para 14 and 15 in the story. It isn't part of it.
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It is short, I think you should expand a little more on the subject, but good job! Keep[up the good work! -Liz
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