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Chocolate eyes searching
For ecstasy, for tenderness,
for friendship2
Truly a sage,
misinterpreted3
but by me.4
Semi satisfied,
partially lost…5
Embodies innocence
A smile to melt hearts,
like mine.6
Golden heart7
Truly perfect,
and completely unaware8
Untryingly flawless…9
A cherub, oblivious10
And she just has no clue.11
‘Tis my best friend12
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Author notes
A poem. About my friend Wendy. And it's very good she doesn't read my stuff. =)
[ilyNTI =)]
Yes. I'm quite aware I haven't edited, IE it needs work. But I needed to get that all out.!
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oh my taylor! another beautiful and wonderful poem!
--- Ted, Fred, and Ned like it too !
ha ha...
and your friend sounds like an amzing girl! You're lucky to have her, its so hard to find true friends nowadays. And, on that topic: you should totally show it to her! I mean, come on, its like super- amazing!
p.s. sorry i haven't commented on anything lately, life's just been terrible busy
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Wow :O
This was AMAZING! And you say I write better! pfft!
Girl you may be a brilliant writer but clueless when it comes to making comparisons with me XD Anyways, I LOVED this! It was absolutely fantastic. So sweet, cute, well detailed, gripping and overall beautifully written.
Great job and keep it up Tay Tay!
~*Princess*~
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xD Thanks.
You DO! Hmp. Thanks. ^^
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To your AN's.
Now. The poem. It's beautiful. Just like you. And you should SHOW IT TO HER!
Seriously, unedited or not, it came from that heart. I love it, and she'll love it too if only you'd give it to her.
[ilyTRH =)]
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I'm just so adorable
NOT!
Ahw. I love you, you sweet suck up. And NO, I should not!
You love it because you're NAILA!
YAY! You caught it! I love you more.
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You just had to lie and put that "NOT" part in, didn't you?
I love you too, you ignorant-of-your-own-worth woman. And why on Earth not?
And she'll love it because she's WENDY!
Of course I did. And no, you don't.
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I like to tell the truth!
Because. She would hate it.
-_-" No.
I knew you would. Yes, I do!
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If you did, you wouldn't have added that.
Ah. I see. Okay then, subject dropped.
Well duh. I always read your work thoroughly. Enjoy it too much not to. Well now, this could go on forever...
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...So much.
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Indeed. Last words:
THANK YOU.
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