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Eva looked around in amazement.2
"This is better than your place Alex." Eva said laughing.3
"I must admit this is a beauty."4
They looked at the big screen television that was placed against a wall in the middle of the huge room. There was a couch in front of it a few feet away, and a bunch of beanbags around. Alex looked around and noticed three doors. Nina noticed what Alex was looking at.5
"One of those doors leads to a bathroom, another is to my father's room and the last one is my room. I think I will be giving you guys that room for tonight." Nina said smiling.6
"But where will you sleep?" Eva asked.7
"Right here, I don't mind." Nina said. 8
"Plus, it's either my father is awake and I'm sleeping, or vise versa. Someone has to watch this place." Nina said.9
"Wow. You guys are set back here." Alex said, sitting down on the couch.10
There was a sink and a microwave and a refrigerator at the far end of the room. 11
"I could stay here for a long time." Alex said laughing.12
"We wouldn't mind if you did." Nina said, joining in on the laughter.13
Eva was feeling tired and plopped into a bean bag chair. 14
"So Nina, how old are you?" Eva asked, trying to make conversation.15
"Well, I'll officially be 19 in a few hours, but now I'm still 18." Nina said, sticking out her tongue, joking.16
"You're an Arab 'eh?" Alex asked. 17
"Yea. My dad was born in Syria, but I was born here." Nina said.18
"Where's your mother?" Eva asked, noticing that there were no pictures of her mother anywhere.19
Nina didn't answer the question. She looked down at her feet. Nina began to fold and unfold her hands nervously.20
"Well, I guess we should be heading in to bed now. Thank you so much for the room Nina, you're a sweetheart." Alex said, noticing that Nina felt uncomfortable at Eva's question. He tried to take some of the pressure off of her.21
"It's no problem." Nina said, leading the two to her bedroom. 22
Eva and Alex said goodnight to Nina and walked into the bedroom. Eva took off her shirt and pants and jumped into bed. 23
"I am so extremely tired! Agh." Eva said, closing her eyes.24
Alex got into bed with Eva and placed his hand on her stomach.25
"Are you so tired that you won't do one thing?" Alex asked, his words drifting as he watched Eva open her eyes and smile.26
Eva realized that Alex might be used to all the horror going on in his life, he must have not bothered to remember everything. Maybe that's why he didn't care if he and Eva made love tonight.27
"Are you feeling kind of down?" Eva asked carefully as she supported herself with her elbows.28
"I'm okay." Alex said coldly, his eyes seemed distant for a bit, but then he smiled at Eva.29
Alex laid on top of Eva and kissed her neck softly. He felt Eva's legs wrap around his waist and felt her hand trickle down his back, and back up. Eva parted her lips and let out a soft moan as she felt Alex enter her. She wrapped her arms around him tightly, her chest pressed tightly against his. 30
"Ohh Alex, Alex..." She moaned louder.31
Eva realized that they were not in the privacy of his own home, she felt like she needed to control herself, but she couldn't help it. Alex was beginning to fuck her hard.32
"Oh God, oh God, Ahh" She moaned louder, feeling her thighs and legs go numb.33
Alex and Eva continued for minutes until Alex finally exploded into her. She held his hand tightly as he moaned loudly.34
"Oh my.. Wow Alex." Eva said, breathing hard as she layed there.35
Alex moved to the side of Eva, and laid down next to her, breathing hard. He moved his hand over Eva's stomach and down to her vagina. Eva lifted her left leg up, giving Alex more room as he played with her. 36
Alex began to feel turned on once again, and they made love another time. Minutes passed as they laid in the same bed next to each other breathing hard. Alex whispered loving words into Eva's ear and watched her fall asleep. He wrapped his arms around her as she fell asleep, her back pressed against his chest. He smiled and smelled Eva's hair one last time before he too fell asleep.37
Nina twisted and turned on the couch trying to get some sleep.38
"Finally." She whispered through a small giggle.39
The last thing Nina heard before falling asleep was the sound of her father turning the page of a magazine. He was sitting behind the counter. Nina brushed away guilt and fell asleep. 40
Author notes
One of the shorter chapters. Like the sex scene? I could have added much more where that came from, but I decided not to. Unless you guys think I should.
Chapter 1: http://storywrite.com/Story/1081980
Chapter 2: http://storywrite.com/Story/1083786
Chapter 3: http://storywrite.com/Story/1085652
Chapter 4: http://storywrite.com/Story/1087150
Chapter 5: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1089052
Chapter 6: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1091483
Chapter 7: http://storywrite.com/Story/1093640
Chapter 8: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1097544
Chapter 9: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1099811
Chapter 10: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1103543
Chapter 11: http://storywrite.com/Story/1106082
Chapter 12: http://storywrite.com/Story/1108021
Chapter 13: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1109809
Chapter 14: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1112990
Chapter 15: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1115146
Chapter 16: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1120932
Chapter 17: http://storywrite.com/Story/1123217
Chapter 18: http://storywrite.com/Story/1125019
Chapter 19: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1129327
Chapter 20: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1137774
Chapter 21: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1142763
Chapter 22: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1150941
Chapter 23: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1155199
Chapter 25 coming soon. 
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Erm...well...*clears throat* Whatever. So Nina is 18 huh? Let's hope Alex don't fall in love with her...
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The sex scene was a bit too much for me to handle. ._.
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What I don't get issssssssss.. how Eva can be raped and still have sex with a guy.. NO protection.. damn..
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hehe....the sex scene was good....yes.
the description is really good, and i think someone will die next chapter 
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I really liked it man you got me hooked to this story i need mre or i'm going to go insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I agree with britin, I hope that they are in on it. It would make the story wayyy coolerer. They seem kind of shady in the sense of them helping him...Right now I am thinking about how I would make the next chapter...I have soo many ideas, Hopefully I can read what is next soon! ...
Funny how so many people are soo hooked on this story!...It is sooo Awesome!
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Oh wow, this was really passionate. Leaves it open to imagination. What is it with Nina and her father though, I have a feeling that there is more to them, than just being freindly.. Hmmmm. Excellent write, waiting impatantly for the next chapter. Keep it up. Tina.
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awesome
Yet another awesome write from you! The stuff in this chapter, i really didn't expect to happen! I didnt expect the sex scene either! It was good that you added something else instead of making it all horror, even though the horror is awesome! Cant wait for the next chapter. Keep writing
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oooh i so need to know whats happeneing! and it was the room? grrrr you made me think something bad was gonna happen and it was a ROOM????? teehee but this was awesome. but theyre waaaaaay too nice, let them DIE! sorry ... the sex scene added .. lets say atmosphere! hehehe but no it woz well cool. keep at it, i really really REALLY need to know what happens! theyve been so so so so sooooooooooo awesome, you really need to write more!!!
loves ya forever
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She was masturbating to them having sex wasnt she!...lol Sorry....I think its wrong for them to have sex in her bed! But hell if I was Eva i woulda too....but im just saying. My mind is gonna stay in the gutter for a while.........
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OOO!! I was right!! It really is a gorgeous room!! Yippee-Skippy!! From what you wrote in the little preview box(Nina brushed away guilt), you totally threw me off here. I thought it'd be about something totally different, and then you throw in sex! I guess every good story has to have one hot and heavy sex scene though. Great job!
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WOW..this was amazing..i cant wait to see what happens next..Good job..keep up the good work!
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OMG this was great. Lol this was great. I loved the sex scene. I don't think you should add more. I mean you could if you wanted to but i think it's fine just the way it is. Oh and I believe as the others that cage is going to kill ninas dad. I can't believe it. *tear* but yeah this was great. Can't wait for more so keep adding Plzz.
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Well, I think if you added any more to the sex scene, you'd have to put it under erotica But I'm not totallt opposed to that, lol. And I think Cage is gonna kill Nina's dad.
*sob* Anyways, can't wait for you to write the next chapter! Keep it cuming! I mean coming. x_x
Bunnie
(Yes, I am sorta a perv. but that comes from hanging with guys all day)
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! cage is gonna kill her dad!!
not fair!! they're soo nice!! naughty alex nd eva!! tee hee!
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haha, you could add more, I wouldn't mind. I'm mature like that... haha, sometimes. Wonderful write. But I want more horror, sure the sex was good, but more creepy stuff! hehe. what can I say, I'm a bloodlust type of vampire.
Great write.
Always and Forever,
~Kendal
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