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The two children peaked around the door, watching their father on the floor and their mother being dragged off with the Shadow Riders.

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Line comes from story: Desert Orphans by NekoFelix

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  • Kevan gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Whoa,
    So captivating and interesting.
    Something I definitely have to read.
    Keep it up.
    Kevan.