The Unforbidden: Adriyan & Layani

Sick. That was what I first thought. The blood, the body, the person standing next to the body covered in blood and holding a hatchet, and the girl. She was bleeding, unconscious. Obviously wounded by the man wielding the hatchet. I thought briefly about how it wasn't my business.1

"What are you doing"? 2

The man covered in blood looked toward me. His hair was matted and stained red. It was hard to tell the color under the pale moonlight. But his eyes is what bothered me. They were royal blue, and bright with the sick delight of seeing blood.3

"They're vampires, they'll wake up eventually". 4

The crazed man cackled, he wanted to kill them again.5

I looked over the unconscious bodies. The man was dead, completely, he had never been a vampire. 6

His face was completely disfigured by the blade of the hatchet, and his chest cavity seemed as though it had been ripped open. Large pieces of his ribcage lay surrounding him.7

The girl was alive. She wasn't a vampire at all, but she would be dead if she wasn't taken to a hospital.(which was not my intent). I couldn't see her face at all, her body was facing the opposite direction, the distance didn't matter. 8

"You think these people are vampires"?9

I asked, he didn't look like he would know. Just some crazy human out for revenge. Out of the corner of my eye I saw that girl twitch.10

The man looked as though he were pondering something. He looked from me, to the hatchet, back to me, and then to the girl. I don't think he noticed she was trying to crawl away. He was too busy wondering whether or not he should attack me.11

He decided on the attack route, and charged at the spot I had been standing in. By then I was already hovering above the girl, who was slowly dragging her body across the concrete sidewalk. I grabbed her up by the hair, bringing her five feet above the ground.12

She tried to scream, but I think the gaping hole in her side would've been a bit of a restriction.13

My mouth clamped down on her exposed collarbone. I could feel her slump as I began to suck the blood from her. The crazed man was approaching fast with the hatchet, yelling.14

I dropped the girl, and caught the man, just as he was about to swing the hatchet into my leg. Wielding it as though he were trying to chop down a tree. 15

I grabbed him up by the neck, listening to two things at once: the girl hitting the concrete pavement with a thud, and the sound of his outraged sputtering.16

I squeezed tightly until he stopped moving. No point in breaking any bones in his body, I didn't want any part of that. I especially resisted the urge to claim him. If you have crazy blood in you, then you'd be just as crazy if not more.17

With vampires you can never tell.18

The girl was still unconscious, this time from her fall to the concrete. I lowered myself to the ground, and scooped her up in my arms. She was pretty. Light golden brown skin, long brown hair. Her eyes are closed now, but they had been light brown. She was young.19

My apartment has been here for centuries. One never knows how many buildings are actually in New York City, or how old any of them are. Some people think all the old ones were destroyed, but that is not the truth.20

I own this building, and I make sure to keep it completely deserted at all times. It is unlikely that I'll be carrying some girl, she'd be walking, and by the end there would be no girl left.21

She looked almost peaceful, it was absolutely enjoyable to watch the change. The sweat beaded on her forehead, her face scrunched up in pain, her mouth open in a silent scream. I could almost hear it ringing in my ears.22

I climbed on top of her. Working my fingers deftly over the buttons and straps her jacket and skirt. There were certain spots of her covered in dried blood, and I licked at them as I discarded her underwear. 23

Her eyes opened. The change was not over, but something dramatic was about to happen. There was little to none of a chance she had fighting me, and surprisingly she laid still. Putting up no resistance as I spread her legs.24

Her glorious smell wafted up to my nose. The smell of a ripe young girl covered in blood, and changing. Some would say it smelled like dying roses.25

I let my clothes disappear and pressed myself firmly against her body. She was small, a lot smaller than I had originally thought. A lot more fragile. I contemplated taking my true form. Thought wasn't one of my immediate needs, and my body began to act on it's own.26

She made small sounds as I thrust into her. I would expect so, her body experiencing so many things at once, she wouldn't have known whether to experience pain or pleasure. I let my fingers roam and my mouth wander, across her lips and her face. Her breasts, and her legs. To me, she was sublime.27

The climax of the change crashed upon us, and I began to speed up. For the first time that night i heard her voice. That scream was so lovely to my ears, and i seemed to watch it in slow motion as her mouth opened, and the voice wafted out. 28

Her eyes shined with tears, and I couldn't hold it in anymore. I burst inside of her, and let out a ferocious roar of my own, collapsing on top of her.29

She breathed heavily, if she had a heartbeat I would be able to feel it pounding against me.30

"You saved me"? She asked. Her voice was hoarse, and it croaked. I wanted to tell her to be silent, but she didn't know the rules yet, I hadn't taught her.31

"Yes". 32

"Who are you"? Her voice was a little clearer this time, and I could feel her eyes on me.33

"I am Adriyan". I whispered to her. She nodded.34

"I am Layani. You killed me". She whispered back, and I smiled with dangerous intent on my mind.

Author notes

Could anyone tell me what they thought of this? I completely love Criss Angel, he is awesome. I try to go see him whenever he's in N.Y. I remember the one when he was in the cement block, I was so scared, but I loved every minute of it!!! I'm eighteen, loving every minutes of it, and my user name is Layani.

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  • awesome

    i found this story very interesting. i liked it alot, and atually read it over a couple of times. he killed and saved her. =^-^=

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Layani
    May 23
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    I didn't put my favorite supernatural movie in the author's note because it's a prewrite. MY favorite supernatural movie is Don't Tempt Me (2005).

    • yah its okay.
      all the stories are prewrites so far.
      i tink i might try and watch this movie.


  • MsAlee gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    I love how she knew that he saved her and yet she also knew that he killed her. Very well written.


    • Layani
      October 12, 2008
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      Thanks you, there is more to it, and thanks for commenting.


  • Layani
    October 10, 2008
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    I think I did great!!!

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