Dominance and submission

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she gets on her knees
When He enters the room
Loving her Master is easy
When He tells her what to do1

"Unzip My trousers"
"Take out My manhood"
"Put it in your mouth"
"Now stay like that"2

He holds her head steady
While He takes her mouth
Making love to her in His way
Showing her how to do it3

she loves to serve Him
It shows on her sweet face
He lifts her up when finished
Kisses her and tastes Himself4

He holds her in His arms
Whispering how He loves her
she says she adores Him too
And shall always be His.

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  • DestinyMagic
    November 6
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    First time on this site. Was looking for love poems about d/s. Very well written


  • Melli
    October 12

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    Hmm, I'm not really quite sure how to feel about this piece. It's pretty well written, I'll give you that. I sorta understand the love of his, for her, but it seems sorta sad. Idk, it seems like he's sorta forcing her into the things she did. But idk really. Good job though!!! keep it up.

    KEEP.WRITING.

    -Melli<33


    • TNTrouble silver member
      October 12
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      Tis alright...either someone gets into D/s or they do not. If not then...they will not understand it.


  • Sgs silver member
    October 10

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    HOT of course, Master T. I also love how you show a picture of a larger sized woman here, something out of the societal "norm." Who would not want to submit to you?


    • TNTrouble silver member
      October 12
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      Ahh you would be surprised how many would not want to...ha.


  • MsAlee
    October 10
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    Great poem, Hun. You know any girl is lucky to be a submissive to you.


    • TNTrouble silver member
      October 12
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      My biggest...and most unbiased...fan speaks. Ha.


      • MsAlee
        October 12

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        You know I mean what I say here. You do write great poetry and hell any girl is lucky to even know you in any kind of way.


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 10

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    i can understand this, for being submissive is its own way of showing love. whomever she is .. she is lucky.

    Sexy


    • TNTrouble silver member
      October 12
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      Aye...I knew you would be understanding this one Sexy.


  • Intrepid
    October 10

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    Adore the picture it is absolutely wonderful to see such a voluptuous woman instead of the bone scrawny woman I have seen in regards to s/d....
    A beautiful, indulgent love poem to go with a splendid picture...

    He holds her head steady
    While He takes her mouth
    Making love to her in His way
    Showing her how to do it

    (my favorite lines)

    well done babe
    Blair


    • TNTrouble silver member
      October 12
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      Well...I happen to prefer larger sized curvey lasses Myself. Sadly tis not always a lot of good photos of them out there.

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