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Biggest, most beautiful set of2
brains3
A vocabulary to make Shakespeare weep4
eyes that lead, plead5
Heart to pump oceans6
an old soul7
a wife to hold rapture near8
in a universe of words9
Aurora soars ascendant10
dancing with Gods11
a bright and shimmering beacon12
lighthouse lens13
distilling purity14
ether of the valiant muse15
verbose lightning16
to hold this fire would be17
sublime18
Raven the warrior19
Gazing down on mere man20
guarding a treasure, bright21
suspicious and guarded22
eyes to penetrate night skies23
relentless24
a simple poet with25
little to offer26
a taste for eloquence27
eyes for beauty28
an open heart29
and a multicolored shoulder30
offered31
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Author notes
What a great contest.
What did you think? Please comment!
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Evocative ...
and eloquent. What more could anyone ask?
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Beautiful words and thoughts to a beautiful sister and goddess but, as the rest of the sisters have pointed out...do you think you can pass the tests??? you are in for a ride dear one, get ready
Be Well and Be Blessed. 
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Hmm, a multicolored shoulder. I have always liked rainbows, I am sure I would feel safe there.
Were you single and this truly a personal ad of some sort, I'd think you have much more to offer. You have already shown me your loyalty as a friend, and that is all I could ask for. "Sweet nothing", my foot. Your words are tender and far more generous than I'd ever say of myself!
Such a delightful piece indeed...thanks for this. A beautiful write indeed.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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Absolutely beautiful Rob
Red -
hey i liked it, it's nice but sorry my vote is elsewhere.
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lol. You are such a lady killer with all that eloquent speech of yours. You did such a wonderful job with this, but that's nothing new... I've always been slightly envious of your writing
"multicolored shoulder"... I liked that.
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Wow, Rob...that was truly lovely! I am sure your words made her feel all giddy and melty inside! Wonderful!
Lorena -
So um Rob did you read that last rule? EVIL GRIN.. This was truly a heartfelt write worthy of our Sister.. And you know your one of my Favorites.. Writing notes.. But hmm can you stand up for the testing phase? Wishing you the best always, Be Safe, Catressa
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Time will tell if your words stand up to the testing. Beautiful sentiments and a deep understanding of my sister is shown in this piece. You have my vote so far.
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April -
Well now, my qualifications would be dependent on who was testing.I'm certain that the wenches would provoke a passing grade.
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Awww... you whisper such sweet nothing into the ear of our dear sister. You words impress me greatly but can you pass the rigorous tests and demands of the remaining wenches in the den? We cannot allow our sister to be carried off by just any man you know. I'm sure some of the girls will be by later for some uhhh... "testing"! Great post. Good luck in the contest Sweetie!
♥ Kimberly
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