Hauntedland's haunted house Part 1

I turned on the television, to watch some cartoons, before that, I saw a commercial saying: Go to Hauntedland, where horror becomes real. Hmm, sounds I like scary stuff so I told my dad and asked if I could go there tomorrow. Since it was Sunday tomorrow, I could go if my family says yes. My dad agreed to go so on Sunday, we went.1

My dad found out which place Hauntedland was and it was not far away. So of we went to Hauntedland. The MTR stopped and we climbed out. It wasn't really special yet. We paid the money and first, we came to a humongous house.2

It's walls were painted all gray and it was like a house but a lot bigger. My brother said that it looked cool, I thought so too so Me and my family came inside the haunted house. The ladies which let us in were dressed like vampires, just to scare us of. But I wasn't scared, no way!3

I waited for the others to line up. It wasn't a very long que, but only kids were in the que. My brother went in to que, followed by my mum and dad.4

My mum and dad went to line up with me and my brother but of the ladies dressed up like a vampire stopped them. She pointed at a sign saying 'kids only'.5

'Have some fun then, we'll wait for you outside' my mum and dad said. Now it was time for us and a few other kids to go inside. It was quite dark in there but we could see some red words dripping with paint. The writing said:6

You may choose 7

A room8

But whether which door you choose9

You'd better choose the skeleton room10

This one11

You'll have the most fun12

Later on you'll have some more13

But now you only have four14

I leaded all the children over. There was actually four doors. I automatically chose the skeleton room because they said so. I opened the door, I went inside, the other children followed me since I think they were a few years younger than me. 15

We looked at the remains of the bones, nothing scary yet. A child ran ahead of me, and then I heard a scream. The other children and my little brother were probably surprised.16

We ran to see what has happened. A skeleton had cut of the little girl's arm! The skeleton saw us and chased us, as we ran, more skeletons came. I quickly gave the little girl a tissue to but on her wound. The little girl stopped crying. Then of we ran again.17

Suddenly, my brother tripped over a bone, the skeletons killed him and he turned into a skeleton. We kept on running. Out of breath I stopped. There we were face to face with a gigantic skeleton of a dragon. It was about 40 meters tall and 50 meters long!18

It growled and roared. It even puffed fire. We dodged it and each time it hit the ground, it sizzled and then the fire went out. The skeleton caught us all! It swallowed us up without biting. Luckily it didn't bite because if it did, it's sharp teeth would kill us.19

Down and down we went, and then I found two doors inside. I wondered which one to choose. The words said said:20

The exit is near21

is it clear?22

You probably would want to cheer23

In the sea monster's den24

You'll meet Ben25

You'll find a door,26

So you go back to to Hauntedland's floor27

But danger lies ahead28

So you'd better look ahead29

So I choose the sea monster's den and the children followed me. When we went in, we found a big submarine, just big enough to fit all of us.30

We climbed in, I steered it although I didn't know, I just tried. It only had one hour's air supply though. I steered the ship and of we went into the murky waters to find the sea monster... 31