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So what would you do to have a chance to live forever? What would you be willing to do to keep it?

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From my story the violin of Audric Beaumont http://storywrite.com/story/135056

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  • Kevan gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Hmm..
    interesting.
    I like it, and I want to read more, for sure.
    Keep it up and good luck in the contest.
    xoxox.
    Kevan.


  • Trever Leonheart
    October 9, 2008
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    Oh, interesting line indeed. A teaser line, I love those!