Tonight I, must face the fact that what they claim is the truth.
See that light up ahead? We must be very careful. Do not want them to know, that we are on the loose again.
What was that, what did you say? No, we can not kill her today. Why? Come on you know the answer. She must live or we will die.1
Just one push over the edge, no one will miss her. For she shows nothing but pure madness talking to us each day.2
Shhhh, someone might hear you, don't you understand? None can hear us but... her. The one we must get rid of.3
There she goes, right on time, closing her eyes as we watch on. Got the knife? Bring it here.
No, wait, let her live. I beg of you, just let her be.
Please, can't you see what is going on? I do not want to die. Not today.
Look, she is opening her eyes again, we let the chance slip away.
She will have to be careful,each night she goes to sleep.
Wait .... not the pills... 4
stop....Stop.....5
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STOP7
Author notes
just thoughts that goes through the mind before sleep can take one away. with the ticking of the second hand .... tic... tic... tic
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Comments
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Wow, very well written.
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This was really great and perfect for the contest. was chaotic in a way and enjoyable because of it.
Good job.
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This put me in the mind of someone who could possibly be schizophrenic!! I like it!!
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Thank you dear for that, i try to put myself in the shoes of the one i was writing for
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