Chapter Five "Crashed Confusion"

Looking around she realized that she was in her own car. She was on that same road where the accident occured. The snow had all melted away and the trees were green. Her chain was wrapped around the pedals and her keys only an arms reach away in the passenger seat. She started the car and pulled onto the road. She thought for a second if Gina had been waiting...or if her parents had called? She finaly decided to head home. Without warning the snow came back and the wind blew her car around violently. Pulling off the road she felt that familiar bump. The car took off down the road. It was hit in the passenger side once again. Sarah found herself right back to where it started passed  out with her head on the wheel.1

Gazing out a window...she was moving again...her leg chained to the wall. She was back in the van. A marker was laying on the sil of the window. She picked it up and hid it as well as she could in her pants pocket. The van came to a stop. And the two men were back, she still couldnt make them out. They reached in for her and removed her chain. She went willingly lowering her head and favoring the pocket where she hid the marker...this was her only posession...she would not let them break her. She was taken through the warehouse and to a steel door.2

The door flung open and Sarah was thrown to the floor. She noticed nothing in this room. A light dangled overhead faintly lit. The door slammed and broke the silence. Regaining what little strength she had she reached for the door. Hoping it would open and she could once again try to get away she turned the knob. To no avail, she sat back on the floor.  The room was very small and she felt a little claustrophobic. How would she get out, if she could, would this all happen again? Was she stuck in a repition?3

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  • tragic images
    March 30, 2005
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    ooo! I wonder what happens next! This is a great story so far, though. I really enjoy reading it. I can't wait to read more!

    ♥Jessi