Imagine a place where senses don't exist. 1
Author notes
The story is called 'Broken'
A contest entry
- Hook Me. by Kevan.
100 points, ended October 30, 2008, 73 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Perfect.
This is exactly what I wanted for an entry.
In just one line you've created an image in someone's mind. Yet your image is incomplete making them want more.
Really good job.
Best of luck.
xoxox.
Kevan.
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