6 Words

Thought she'd like it. Guess not.

A contest entry

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  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    October 13, 2008

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    Mmmm, yeah, I agree with Mr Majenta, who is she?? and it does leave the reader wondering, I like it, well done =DD

    -Dani


  • Mr Majenta gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    my only question...

    who is she?
    but don't answer, it lets my mind wander


  • LoneWriter
    October 10, 2008
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    Made me think of the many possibilities this memoir would be about. Good luck in the contest!


  • Girl Anachronism
    October 7, 2008
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    This made me want to tilt my head to the side and go "Hmmm."

    Good luck in the contest.

    • Minorchar
      October 7, 2008
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      haha, thanks. I came up with it the other day when I was thinking idly about what I'd write if asked to write a six-word story...

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