I stared at the sky, so beautiful. I looked at the stars, shining so brightly. I saw something, not a comet, because it was so much smaller than a comet. I saw it fall down to earth.1
I asked it questions, I know its silly. But to my suprise, It speaked. It was like a star, yellow and bright. Wow, I've never seen such a star like that. It said: 'The bad stars have pushed me to the ground and stolen the star queen's crown. Without it we stars will die. They have set a spell that only young girls like you can save us stars.' 2
'I don't understand' I said. The star said 'look in the stars book'. I loved that book, that was only the first book, there is two parts in it. But, the second part never was written. There was no second part.3
It goes like this: 'a girl saw a star which has fallen down, she picked it up. To her astonishment, the star spoke. 'help me. Bad stars in my land have pushed me down to earth. They also took away the queen's magic crown. Without it, we stars will die in two days. They cast a spell on me so only young girls like you could save me '. The girl agreed and the star used it's flying power to bring her up to the land where stars live.' 4
I asked the star if what was in the book was true. He said yes sadly so off we went. I realised that I was the girl in that story. We went up, zooming in the clouds. It was so high up and finally, we were there.5
I saw stars lots of stars which were unhappy, I guess it was because of the bad stars. The star which fell on the ground showed me to a palace. 'It isn't the queen's palace, It is where the bad stars live, they hid the crown in a secret chamber. We also need to say a password to go in.' I knew the story to the password. I knew it. It is this: manahana. 6
I said the password. The star couldn't go in because there were sensors for stars. So I braveley went in myself. The star kept saying to me before I came in: 'remember, bad stars are trickery' but thre are forgetful sometimes. I didn't know what that meant but still, I kept that in my head.17
When I came in, I saw that there were loads of corridors, but I didn't know which one to take, I saw a sign pointing to one door so I went in. Oh no! It put me in a cell. I understood what the star said now.8
Finally, I saw an exit. I didn't trust it. I paced around, not knowing what to do. The walls were made of strong brick and the walls were about 10 metres tall. I knocked something and then I went into another room, not a cell. What a relief!9
It was just a plain, emtey room with only one single book. It said on it: the big book of magic spells. I knew that was usefull. I was hungry so I looked into the book. To have spaghetti You have to say ono spaghettio. I said it and a plate of spaghetti came out. I slureped it down.10
I read a page saying: transport page. I read it and there was something which said: go to the meeting room. I guess it was the secret room because I saw the words faintly written which said: top secret. I belived in this book because the star said that they were sometimes forgetfull.11
I read the spell and imedietly, I was outside the meeting room. I put my ear aganist the door and heard low, hoarse voices saying 'haha, the good stars will die and we shall rule'. I had to do something about it but what will I do?12
I thought about the magic book. Maybe, I could do some spels on them when they are discussing their things because thry wouldn't do evil magic. I bet bad stars know evil magic. And that's when I had to battle with magic... 13
I opened the book and said a spell to make all the bad star's magic to be gone. Wow! It was so complicated! I tried and tried and finally I said it.-Just a bit too loud. Opps, the bad stars heard me!14
I turned around to run, but a hand grabbed me. The bad stars came out, I realized the leader of the bad stars was who had grabbed me. They tried to say a spell to do something to me, I think it was to bind me with invisible ropes.15
They didn't succeed because I had done the spell, I guess they just wanted to try. The leader of the bad stars began scolding them. I saw my chance. I ran and ran, through the dark corridors and down the stairs. I stopped to take a breath. Oh no! I heard the bad stars chasing me! I frantically said a spell to block them from coming by a wall.16
The bad stars tried to push down the wall and it felt hard to keep the wall up with magic. I tried with all my strength, pushing, not with my force but concentrating, pretending I was really pushing. It was really hard since I have never tried before but I finally kept the wall from falling, to hold it for a few more minutes.17
Then I sped of. I used to be slow at running in my school, people always said I was slow. But not now. I wasn't going to be teased because I was slow. Then I went to the place where a door would lead to the exit or entrance.18
I chose a door but I chose the wrong one, I was sent flying down to a dark room where there were books everywhere, I was in a maze of books. Now what, I thought, what am I going to do?19
I read some books to pass the time, they were just about spells and stuff and how to go in and go out of this place. Oh yeah, that means I can go out. I found some books about transportation and some of them, even fiction and non-fiction books.20
I knew my mission, I had to find the bad stars and bring them to the queen star. I searched lots of rooms and then I found them in the meeting room. I just used the book's spells to catch them. I found the spell about the invisible ropes and I tied the rope with magic around the bad stars.21
I found that dark room with books. I grabbed some books about going in and out and in the meeting room, tied them up and went out of that castle with one of the book's pages telling me how to do that.22
All the stars cheered when I got back the bad stars. The bad stars just moaned to me begging me to set them free. 'No way! 23
you deserve punishment' I replied.24
The queen said 'the bad stars wrote part of the book and only you could finish the story. Everything gets recorded here like what you done and know we can finish it'. I saved the whole of the place where stars live.25
Now every star knows me because I'm famous in their land. They sent me back home by a star and I climbed in bed, it was just time for me to sleep. The stars said they recorded what I thought and that sort of stuff and what happened to me. And here you are, this it my story.
Author notes
Hope it's not too long.
Okay? Too long?
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i want it to by not too long
i like it to be a little short.
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Sorry to say this
but it's too short. I'm so sorry. Hearing this must hurt you. -
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Then I might not read yours. Because, I hate long stories unless they make me really really want to read it. Well I only once read some thing ten thousand words long.
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