Poem for you

Right now when I'm typeing this your not on1

You said our friendship is long gone2

We were having a fight about right and wrong3

I bet I did so much destruction, I was like King Kong4

You are very important to me you say5

I hate seeing you like this its not ok6

I respond to you with dirty words7

I wish I could take it back8

Pretending not to miss you will be hard to lack9

I cant believe I'm saying this10

I love you, maybe not enough to give you a kiss11

But you'll still be the one I miss

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I'm so sorry, you know who you are. Even though its not my best, its still a test

Forgive me

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  • LadyLionnir
    October 18, 2008

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    Aww. Ending a friendship sucks, I remember some of them. Good times and bad times! It's nice to have writing to fall back on, though, I always know mine will be there when I need it.

  • DinoRoar
    October 4, 2008
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    sad

    im sorry your havin probs, old buddy old pal!