Love, you're no friend of mine1
You saw this whole thing coming2
Even though you claim you're blind3
I gave my heart to you to give to him4
But only for a while did he treat it like a gem5
I'm standing in sad solitude in the rain6
It's so cliche but, I'm through with love again7
Love, you're no friend indeed8
Now I'm sitting here and crying9
And I'm begging on my knees10
Please don't do this to me11
It feels like I'm dying12
My heart is full of woe and pain13
It hurts me to say, I'm through with love again14
You wont get a chance to hurt me anymore15
I have installed tight security on my heart's door16
There's no keys, there's no locks, there's no passwords to undo17
Don't come knocking cause there's no way for either of us to come through18
Don't bring any new candidates or any from my past19
I am letting go I'm done with all of love at last...
Author notes
This is a song I wrote about experienced heartbreak.
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Comments
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aww.. i think we all go through this phase once in our lives.. i can totally relate to this and i know how you feel.. it was really really well written and i liked your style of writing.. well i hope you get over it and feel better.. take care now
bye =D

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Wow you wrote how you felt and you got a rhyme in there as well. I've written pieces like this but I've never managed to get a rhyme. I understand how you feel...great write. You got at least from what I've seen all of your emotion in. Great. I enjoyed this. Keep It up




