A Sad Love Song

Love, you're no friend of mine1

You saw this whole thing coming2

Even though you claim you're blind3

I gave my heart to you to give to him4

But only for a while did he treat it like a gem5

I'm standing in sad solitude in the rain6

It's so cliche but, I'm through with love again7

Love, you're no friend indeed8

Now I'm sitting here and crying9

And I'm begging on my knees10

Please don't do this to me11

It feels like I'm dying12

My heart is full of woe and pain13

It hurts me to say, I'm through with love again14

You wont get a chance to hurt me anymore15

I have installed tight security on my heart's door16

There's no keys, there's no locks, there's no passwords to undo17

Don't come knocking cause there's no way for either of us to come through18

Don't bring any new candidates or any from my past19

I am letting go I'm done with all of love at last...

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This is a song I wrote about experienced heartbreak.

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  • RuiN - IbZzI
    October 7, 2008

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    aww.. i think we all go through this phase once in our lives.. i can totally relate to this and i know how you feel.. it was really really well written and i liked your style of writing.. well i hope you get over it and feel better.. take care now

    bye =D


  • Luckyk
    October 6, 2008

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    Wow you wrote how you felt and you got a rhyme in there as well. I've written pieces like this but I've never managed to get a rhyme. I understand how you feel...great write. You got at least from what I've seen all of your emotion in. Great. I enjoyed this. Keep It up