Let the Words flow


~guy & gal~1

Let your words flow
across the ocean of life
Let your words flow
while we live in strife2

~guy~3

My love I gave
and you threw it away
Looked to another
so I'm leaving today4

Tell me what he has
that I'll never hold
It's your love
for to me it's cold5

~guy & gal~6

Let your words flow
across the sea of shame
Let your words flow
for to you it's a game7

~gal~8

Told you once before
that to me you're just a friend
He is all I really
ever want until the very end9

Everything that I hold
both true and dear
Is wrapped up in
the one that I hold so near10

~guy & gal~11

Let your words flow
around me once more
Let your words flow
and carry me to shore12

Let your words flow
from here upon my heart
Let your words flow
can we have a new start13

~whispered~14

Let your words flow
with mine from this day
Let our words flow
for lover here I want to stay 15

Author notes

just an attempt to write a love song

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  • MsAlee gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    Beautifully done. I can easily see this being sung by two people with simple pure voices.


  • TNTrouble
    October 8, 2008

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    Very good...I love the way you use the word "flow" so much... as to flow tis a very good thing. *smiles*


  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 4, 2008
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    Excellant work...would be a lovely song. Le travail parfait!.

  • mcfreeman
    October 4, 2008
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    can you say Bellamy Brothers