Lynn walk in to her house.Lynn's mother and the cult leader Dahlia talk about Alessa being burned..Alessa was a 7 year old who had paranormal powers...Dahila seys it was for the good of the cult..Lynn walks to her room chiped paint on the wall the room smelled of mold rotten wood.."what if they burn me next " Lynn thinks to her self she takes a deep breath..lynn slips out of the house she ran along out side she feels the mud and dirt sqwash between her toes she stays in shadows.She seesa armless man spitting acid at her se losss it she finds the end of town she looks the sign "welcome to silent hill " the sign seys lynn walks alittle while holding her while she could see her own breath it starts to rain..Lyns cloithes was ashy and muddy she could smell smoke on her.1
Apolice officer sees her he stops .."Are you ok" he asked watching her reportinlynn claspes .lyn sees the cop runing to her then it all gose black lynn holds her bear tightly..
dont be harsh,..
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Ok, first off awesome, you're posting again and writing again, which as you know, I'm sure, makes me happy.
I like this story and I want to see where you take it.
If you don't mind a little critique then all I have to say is watch your grammar and spelling. Other than that, this was great and I'd really like to see where you go with this. Please continue writing. God Bless!
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