close your eyes and take my hand,
for we are heading across this land
to a place where angels play
where it is neither night or day1
perfect weather all the time
being sad would be our only crime
for soft pearly gates stand wide
and we come and go side by side2
love is all they show up here
it is very pleasant my dear
time and space can not touch us
for here dreams come true without a fuss3
morning finds eagles passing by our door
soft clouds the night before was our floor
forgiveness is our way of life
no suffering here where there is no strife4
with me here by your side love
we can caress the lovers dove
hiking down the streets of gold
this place is never cold5
lets go sailing in the clouds my sweet
for this piece of heaven is a treat
tranquil all the time you'll see
as long as you are here with me6
will you travel to this land?
accept what I offer, by taking my hand.
this is what I wish for us today
so, love what do you say? 7
Author notes
okay not a story, but a love poem
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Very good poem about the third Heaven. I liked the sensory imagery in this.
One typo: Perfect
Thanks for sharing this. I would definitely go, and I plan to in the future.
God bless you.
Beth
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 5.
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Thank you for finding that, I try and forgot to use spell check this time around.
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A very nice song
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a love song, i heard it sung in my head.. but thought only of it as a poem.
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