If I gave you a rose for all your pain and strife1
You'd have enough roses to last all your life2
And if I took one away for each happy time3
You'd be without roses4
But, that's just fine5
Overall, you could say that you've had a good life6
Being a sister, daughter, mother, and a good wife7
And, even though your face shows that you had it rough8
Your heart always showed you were there when the goin' got though9
And I admit that I didn't appreciate you then10
But I love you now as I look to back when11
I used to sit on the floor between your legs12
And you'd brush my hair13
Those were the days14
And, I'll never forget you so don't think I ever would15
You truly are the little engine that could....
Author notes
I wrote this for my mom
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Aw, this is so beautiful!! I'm sure she cried her heart out when she read it. I can feel your love for your mother pouring out.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Kate
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awwwwww thats sooo sweeeettt...everyone should write something like this for their moms cuz they feel really unappreciated .. u know what.. uve inspired me to write something about my mom as well =D.. anyways.. it was a really well written poem. everything was perfect and i found nothing to criticize.. take care and have a good life =D
bye =D
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Adorbale
So sweet and beautiful
I wish more and more would start to realize their love for their parents and show it...
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Beautiful!! I know she has to love it. I love the memory of sitting in front of her while she brushed your hair, I always loved that and still love for someone else to brush my hair.
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Aww thats sweet! We all love our moms... but we never tell them enough!
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