Love is...

I believe there are two forms of love. There is 'love'... and then there is 'being in love.' When you 'love' someone you know it in your heart, but when you are 'in love' with someone everyone else knows it. That is the love that consumes my entire being. I cannot keep it inside. Everyone can see it.

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  • Frozen Angel
    April 3

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    I agree that when you are in love the whole world can see it. When I was pursuing my now-boyfriend, it was obvious to everyone around us. I think this would've been a little more powerful if you added in just a little more detail.

    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest.

    *Frozen Angel*


  • LoneWriter
    January 29

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    This is cute, although more detail would have made it a bit more original.

    Good luck in my contest!

    ~Lone


  • KitterBean
    October 6, 2008
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    Totally. I think i saw this one before, but agree fully

    Great choice

    Cat


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    October 5, 2008

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    That it is. Very nice discription, at first I didn't get it, then it clicked!! lol, great job, keep it up =DD

    -Dani


  • Nikki Rowles
    October 5, 2008
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    oh oh oh soo so so true....you hit that nail right on the head....that's what makes it so totally wonderful...but painful all at once.....good job and good luck...oh...btw...love the name....lonesome dove rocks!

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