Fairy Princess

'Mum, can I go out to play?'. I asked my mum the fairy queen if I could. That means I'm a fairy princess. 'Ok' said my mum so I ran out to play. She told me not to get close to these giants called humans.1

The palace guards always asked me about my safety, of course. They asked me for a long time and finally, I broke free. I hated it but I'm used to it. 2

I flew to my friends. We did somersaults in the air. I walked across to a bunch of pretty flowers. I knew some spells, those flowers inspired me, I said a few words and it turned into a tiny mouse. I watched it skitter away.3

I continued picking flowers. 'Ahhh'. I screamed and I quickly flew up. I knew it. I had gone to those enormous creature's home. I safely landed on the soft grass, except that it was much bigger. I looked around the gigantic trees, suddenly, I realized I was lost.4

I didn't know many magic spells and by the way, I'm a princess so I want to find the opening to my world. 'I command you to help me find the opening to my world'. I pointed at the tree but I knew nothing would happen.5

I suddenly heard a really load sound booming sound. The humans. I frantically tried to fly behind those big trees but it was no use. The human had found me.6

He stared at me and he said I was beautiful. I suddenly looked to the east and there was the opening! except that the human was blocking my way. I was scared and angry. He looked at me, with his eyes staring at me. It's so annoying! Think about someone eyes locked at you. Isn't it annoying? I think the human loved me. No way was I going to let him kiss me!7

'Uh hi'. I said. He was so suprised I could see the look on his face. He said to me 'could you come with me? My freinds will never belive you are a fairy'. I didn't say anything because I think that I would say something without thinking about it. Like: go away, I don't like you. I was scared I would hurt the person's feelings. Insted, I just said to him 'I have to go'. But the person didn't. He said 'stay with me'. 8

I saw some pretty flowers which made me have a good idea. I changed the flowers to another copy of me except that it just fluttered around and didn't say anything. Just then, the human wanted to hug me. No way could the human do that!9

The human then saw the other copy of me and hugged it. The human didn't know he was hugging flowers. I quickly flew to the east and went back to my world.10

My friends were worried but I didn't tell them what happened. I said it was a secret. I went to the palace just in time for my lunch.

Author notes

I might really want to be a fairy.

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  • T-Rex
    November 27, 2008
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    Pretty good

    I like it!!


  • patrickhschan
    October 18, 2008
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    good one


  • patrickhschan
    October 5, 2008
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    is the fairy ok? *sud*


  • Dawn Bon
    October 2, 2008

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    Iffy

    I really want to be a fairy too. i love them and mermaids. This is pretty ok, may i ask hwo old you are? And very short though. There wasnt really any interaction or dialogue between the afiry and they boy and thats what i asked for. But i wont disqualify you. Mostly because im not sure how... ok yes i know how now but i wont because im not that mean.
    good luck!


  • Kirin
    October 2, 2008

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    Very interesting... Very good imagination. In the story the princess cast some spells with the flowers, but you say you don't know any spells in para 5. I suggest you change that to 'many' spells. Otherwise, it is very nice Good luck with the contest.

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