♥ giggle, giggle in these times of joy ♥

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Author notes

well, it used to be a smiley face holding up a help sign but due to the distortion that allpoetry reaked on my formatting that I did in Microsoft Word, it looks kind of like a weird ghost thing rising up lol. and look at how the bottom one got squished! lol, I'm so easily amused. and the progression is from heaven to hell and both welcome you with open arms.

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Comments


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    The vanpire make his first appearance in "A Hedonistic Vampire" written several days ago. The first installment moves quicker I think.

    This poem reads easy.

    Andy


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    Wow, the intent here is really cool. I like the heaven to hell motif. Yep, I hate it when the formatting gets all screwed up. Boy you put a lot of work into this, I'm impressed. Thanks for entering.