????? Prologue

Tragedy. The fire blazed and licked up the walls.
Screams. Piercing the air. I felt so helpless. Glued to the spot. Wanting to help, but not able to move.
Sirens. Racing down the road toward the house.
I didn't know what to do. If I stayed, they'd have found me and finished me off, just like my friends. If I had called for help, that could have also been trouble. I didn't know who worked for who. They could have been one of them. I can't trust anyone.
So, I had to do what I thought best. I had to run.
I wasn't glued to the spot anymore. The fire no longer held me there. The sirens had stopped and only the lights still flashed. I could no longer hear the screaming, the terror loud in their voices. I had to leave. I couldn't stay any longer.
I turned my back on my past and that house, out to make a new future. Hopefully.
I ran.
BANG!

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  • EphemeralStyle
    October 1, 2008

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    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!!!! You should definitely continue with it!! I am so interested right now! Explain, explain! xD

    *shakes fist* Keep writing, foo.

    Eph

  • PaintedRainbows
    October 1, 2008
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    Sounds like it'll be interesting.