Taking it in.

taking in the story 1

images slow 2

images go bright and blurry 3

Story crshing into my mind4

stars expode in my eyes 5

minds lost on the freqency 6

bounding out of time into space 7

stars turn black lights out freqency is lost

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man I am stoned.

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  • RuiN - IbZzI
    October 7, 2008

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    i dunno man.. it seems very profound and deep.. maybe getting high helps you with your creativity =P.. not that i would suggest that you get high all the time XD .. anyways.. awesome job man.. keep up the good work =D

    bye =D


  • MsAlee gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    Good job, Very interesting subject.

    Might help to fix up the spelling a bit but otherwise good.


  • StreetRider
    October 2, 2008

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    ill definetly go with strange. But i can see how this story works. Still done a pretty good job lol. So keep it up buddy!