Character’s personal details 1
First name: Jayde2
Surname: Delmont3
Age: 15 almost 164
Jayde had a regular childhood until she was about 6 years old. Her parents were desperately trying to escape a coven of Sanguinarian vampyres that had threatened them. Their car drove into a tree and both her parents died. Jayde was brought to a nearby hospital by the coven and turned into a vampyre herself, to be awakened in 10 years. Now Jayde's almost 16, her age of awakening, and she's becoming more like the monster she's destined to be but she doesn't know why. 5
She lives with her Aunt Debbie after getting kicked out of several other relatives houses over the years because of bad behavior.6
The role of the character in your story 7
What are character’s goals? 8
to stop the coven from hurting her friend Kristine and herself. controlling her abilities. protecting Shane*.9
What are character’s motivations? 10
to live the life she wants and be truely happy. (writing)(people she loves)11
What is the character’s conflict? 12
the coven is controlling her life, trying to hurt Kristine for being attached to their son and Shane for what they think is being used by Jayde. Theyre still mad about the revenge they never got on Maggie,Jaydes mother.13
How will the conflict stop the character from reaching his goal? itll make Jayde down about life and feel trapped. 14
She will come close to losing the only people in her life that care for her and love her as much as she loves them and she will feel powerless.15
What is he going to do to overcome the conflict?16
Anything she can. She will find the covens weaknesses and take advantage of them herself. She will try running away from them just like her mother almost resulting in a re-run of the beginning moments of her life.17
What problems will crop up during the story? 18
Jaydes inner demons. Kristines self-multilation problem. Jayde using Kristine as a donor and putting her in danger. Kristine falling for Kyle. Jayde falling for Carsyn and trusting him with everything, then finding out he was helping the coven fight against her. 19
How will those problems get worse? 20
As the story progresses, the problems will worsen depending on the circumstances, before they are solved.21
What will the character do to overcome those problems? 22
Jayde will open up to people and learn about whats happening to her. Kristine will get help after a long struggle, and get conseling which will fail when she becomes Jaydes donor. Once Jayde stops using her as a donor her life wont be so messed up and conseling will continue. Kristine wont do much when with Kyle because she doesnt realize who he truely is and how dangerous loving him could be. When Jayde learns of what Carsyns there for, she will become depressed and try to set revenge but then she will meet Shane and he will help her move on.23
How will your character’s background influence how he behaves in your story? 24
Itll be hard for Jayde to talk to people and let people into her life so before she does, she will be anti-social and very alone. That will make her life miserable and even more so when she becomes what she will. She is such a sadistic and cynic person that who ever hurts her will be in a great danger because her anger is strong. By the end of the story she will have changed into less of what she was and become happier and trusting more of people, because she wont see the world so bitterly.25
What is the relationship with other characters, if any, in your story? 26
Carsyn becomes Jaydes fling/boyfriend.27
Kristine becomes Jayde closest friend.28
Kristine and Kyle think theyre in love (or maybe just Kristine).29
Kyles family is the Coven thats against Jayde and reason she is who she is.30
Physical Descriptions 31
Height: about 5'732
Eye colour: hazel33
Hair colour: dyed black34
Hairstyle:straight with layers.35
Hair length slightly past shoulder length and long36
Complexion: normal pale at the beginning-translucent, porcelain, white at the end37
Shape of face: oval with high cheek bones and a long, thin nose38
Body type: skinny with small curves but mostly boyish figure39
Weight: slightly below average about 125-13040
How does his expression change when… 41
He’s with a loved one: her soft side is shown and she almost melts 42
He’s with someone he dislikes: her eyes stare in rage and disgust and sometimes she loses her temper43
He’s with his boss: she does not work yet44
He’s with a colleague: (in school) she keeps to herself and almost pretends that they arent there45
Personality 46
Type? (shy, outgoing, insecure, dominant etc) 47
shy and insecure but dominant and feisty48
a tiny bit arrogant,other times jaded49
she puts on a "disguise" for the world to see50
so that nobody sees her weakness and pain51
Mental scars? (Complexes etc) 52
-her parents death53
-the fact that shes a turned Sanguinarian Vampyre 54
-heartbreak and the fact that everyone has used her then betrayed her55
Ambitions? 56
to prove to everyone, shes not jus some loser girl thats always depressed57
and to become a writer58
without the chains she has always worn with the Coven watching over her59
Sense of humour? 60
-only sarcasticly61
Fears? 62
-being left alone with no one else to care63
-dying64
-herself (when awakened)65
-the Coven 66
Anxieties? 67
-the Coven68
-herself69
Phobias? 70
-Undetermined71
How does his personality change when he’s experiencing different emotions? 72
-it stays mostly the same except when faced with the one she cares for, then she lets down her guard73
How does he act when he feels confident? 74
-she barely ever feels confident and when she does shes quiet and to herself about it, just occasionaly smiling75
How does he act when he feels inadequate? 76
-a little suicidal at times, or depressed and worthless77
she loses herself completely in one of these moods especially in the process of awakening78
What gestures does he use when he talks and thinks? 79
-she moves like a zombie and looks away from the person only casually making eye contact80
-when with Carsyn or Shane she stares at them comstantly and just lives in the moment81
-when with Kristine, she opens up a little more as the story goes on but in the beginning she still doesnt trust her so she treats her like any other student at school82
How does he walk? With confidence? Does he slouch or stride? 83
-she walks with her head hung low, staring at the ground or slowly, almost barely moving at all(depressive). always faster than usual when feeling like she normally does. when angry she practically runs.84
What mannerisms does he have? (Does he fold his arms? Does he flick his hair?) 85
-she folds her arms tight across her chest a lot. Or bites the sleeves of her shirt, chews her lip, hides behind her hair/ Any way that she can find that hides herself or keeps her locked away and safe from other people. 86
How does he speak? (Clearly, mumble, confidently, drawl etc.) 87
-she has a sarcastic tone with everyone but when around someone she really likes or she feels small and unimportant she doesnt talk or she mumbles a few words.88
His voice? (Rich, loud, soft, etc) 89
-very soft 90
but deeper than a normal girls. kind of scratchy and throaty. the voice of a heavy smoker. 91
His vocabulary? (Casual, formal, illiterate etc) 92
-filled with cusses and phrases about hurting people93
What does he think when he’s alone? 94
-that the world is an ugly place and she'll never belong in it95
or that some people dont deserve to live96
Does he have any secrets he hasn’t disclosed to anyone? 97
-how alone she really feels, no one every knows how sad she really is and how much she still misses her parents. 98
*SHE LABELS PEOPLE AND JUDGES THEM BEFORE ACTUALLY MEETING THEM*
..................................................................
Likes and dislikes 99
Favourite colour, food, etc:
color: deep crimson (like the blood she craves) food: undeterminded100
Favourite music?:
heavy metal/death metal. anything to drown out the world around her and her own heartache.101
Taste in clothing?:
plain and dark colored. she strives to stand out but blend in. but she tries so hard to appear tough on the outside, sometimes with chains and spikes.102
Does character like something in particular?:
words when writing. music. blood.103
Does character dislike something in particular?:
people in general becuz they have all turned on her. 104
Lifestyle 105
Where does the character live (country, city)?
city106
Does character live in a house, apartment etc
duplex with Carsyn, the guy sent to spy on her and lure her in to help betray her 107
Does character like where he lives?
no its a new place and everything seems forced and she feels out of place.108
Does where he lives reflect what kind of person he is?
yes because she is a lot like the "monster" people that scare her so much.109
Does he have a favourite room? (Or a piece of furniture or other object etc): she likes to sit by herself at dunkin donuts (the local coffee shop) and people watch. 110
Does he have a car? What type? Does the car reflect the person he is?:
she cant drive yet111
Any hobbies? Personal habits (neat, sloppy etc):
isolating herself from everyone and everything.
listening to her ipod, writing in her notebook. staring into space and day dreaming. 112
Background 113
Parents names:
Maggie-mother
someone else.........-father114
Parents occupations:
undetermined115
Describe relationship with parents:
she was very close to both her parents, they were her only friends and the only people she felt understood her even a little but they have deceased and she is alone.116
Any siblings?:
not that she knows of...until she finds out she has a step-sister, Evaline.117
Describe relationship with siblings:
her sister is 21, older than her. They have never met and dont even know the other one exists yet.118
What kind of childhood did the character have?
normal until 6 years old, when her parents were taken away from her and her world just about went up in flames.
ever since then she has been thrown back and forth to various relatives in her family to live with.119
What kind of adolescence did the character have?
she was seen as almost evil toward other children and people and didnt care for anything at all.120
What kind of schooling did character undergo? (Private or public? Has this shaped who he is?)
public.121
What was the highest-level achieved in school?
undetermined122
Citizenship/Ethnic Origin?
caucasian123
In which country does he currently live?
America124
If the country he lives in is not where he was born, why does he live there?
same...125
Character’s current position 126
Any friends? Kristine.127
Any enemies? Carsyn(though she doesnt know it yet), Cody and the rest of the Frances coven.128
Acquaintances? Kyle Frances, Brian Romano.129
Has character been married before? no shes only a teen130
Has the character been engaged before? ^131
Any children? ^^132
Most meaningful experience? hasnt happened yet but possibly meeting Kristine133
Any disappointments? parents car crash134
What is the character’s goal in life? to survive and grow up happy, free of the chains of grief and the Coven135
Attitude towards the opposite sex? cynical136
Attitude towards life? apathetic137
Employment 138
What kind of job does character currently have? none139
What kind of jobs has the character had previously? none140
Is character content in current employment? none141
If not, what would be their dream job? writer142
What do you feel for this character? mixed emotions: sympathetic, angry, disgusted, admiring.143
144
Please login or register to comment.
Registration is required because of issues with spam. It is fast and free! This author would LOVE to get a comment from you, please join!
Comment added. You earned points!
Comments over 100 letters long (this was ) are eligible for points, which you can use to feature your work.
-
right now
Adding your comment:
