Goodnight

The breeze is cool and the shadows have set—
The day’s breath has been assigned billet
To compensate for the sun’s beset
Of thunderous clouds and darkened light,
Of Zeus’s long roars and Hermes’ plight—
The sad lament of Hades’ love
So tormented from those cries above.
So goodnight, goodnight,
Thou old Grecian days.
Goodnight, goodnight...
Thy eld-time ways.1

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  • RuiN - IbZzI
    October 7, 2008
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    aaahh that was soo damn satisfying.. man i love all these mythologies and finding a poem written on them , =D, just makes me happy.. nice job man.. very well written.. i can see how hard it must have been to write it cuz the effort you put into this is really obvious.. good job man.. keep it up

    take care now.. bye =D


  • MsAlee gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    Nice work.


  • IxIDarkMelodiesIxI
    September 30, 2008
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    o.o

    PRETTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent poem Andrew! You ROCK, man!