The Fall

I fell, pushed. By Who?

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  • Tiger-Lily
    October 26, 2008

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    Hm...the capitalized Who, is that meant that way? I like the mystery in this. Sometimes, you really don't know who/what knocks you down, huh?

    Nice.

    -HT


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 28, 2008

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    hmm, weird, you could really go somewhere with this, it seems like a one- liner, I like it, though, it's interesting, great job. keep it up =DD

    -Dani