Forgotten

My life falls
downward
Towards the dark
end
Making everything
seem
like it doesn't
matter1

Mother, father,
sisters,
brothers
All laugh at me
as
I cover my face
Tears spiraling
downward,
making another forgotten
voice2

Like the Satan
making me
bubble over with tears
of sadness3

The frigid stare of
everybody
that I thought
loved me4

The new depression
Making me a forgotten
friend,
A forgotten sibling
and
a forgotten daughter5

With the blood oozing out of my head
I cry with sadness
But smile with joy6

Because now
there is no
more sadness
Just rainbows and butterflys
Laughing with joy7

And me forgotten
like the rain that
fell from the sky,
crying as it does
Like the rain,
I am Forgotten

Author notes

My username is UberXxXFreakazoid. If I had a random banana, I would take a bite of it and then throw it like a boomerang and see if it works. It would probably hit someone in the head.

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  • Artificial.Smiles. gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    This was nice! The way you typed it was weird though. Depth, you have a lot of it in this piece, keep it up!

    Good Luck in my Contest!


  • Oddems.
    September 30, 2008

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    Depressing and sad, but in a beautiful way. The poor girl...makes me wonder even more about her and her story. Wonderful job!

    PR


  • Dassy
    September 29, 2008
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    wow I love your awesome author's note. Anyways, this was awesome and depressing. The chick killed herself right? I portrayed her as a chick, sorri if it's a dude! Anyways, This was super well done, and I'm jealous of their being able to cry skills. I can't cry, so yah.
    Excellent Job!


  • Nikki Rowles
    September 28, 2008

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    It's so pretty...sad but happy and ...it's oxymoronic..but in a good way.....and the banana thing is funny....good luck with this
    Blessed Be
    Lauren


  • Alyana
    September 27, 2008

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    did you read the rules?

    how depressing!
    very well done, but sad, but a good sad, the sad that im sure you want.
    snaps and good luck!
    Alyana

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