My Flower

My hair now turned silver and my hands full of wrinkles, I visit my little flower's grave often, surrounded by silence, and little purple flowers.

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 1, 2008

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    Sounded dark, almost poetic, and made me wonder just what it was all about. Great job! Best of luck in both contests


  • Tiger-Lily
    September 30, 2008

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    This is sad. But I loved it. Sweet adn descriptive at the same time. I like how you imply age with physical description. Makes a unique method there. The "little flower" part is perfect!

    -HT


  • Nikki Rowles
    September 28, 2008

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    very descriptive....and sweet.....and sad all at the same time.....but it's great all at once...good luck in the contests
    Blessed Be
    Lauren*wilte_rose*


  • Fearless.
    September 28, 2008

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    Yep, it lists all the things that Temaria put...beautiful, touching,exquisite and sad...practically everything. Except long. But it doesn't need to be long. Good luck in my contest!

    ~Devil Angel~


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 27, 2008

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    =] I have read the story
    Beautiful... touching....exquisite and sad... But I loved it to tears..good tears of talent.

    GOOD LUCK
    Temaria Blair


  • Kevan gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Great job. Very captivating and well-written. I will have to read the full story once I get around to it, but for now best of luck in my contest, and everything else you attempt to do.

    xoxox.
    Kevan.

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