A gentle wish, a distant touch, and a watchful gaze.
Author notes
My story is called Guardian Angel.
A contest entry
- Hook Me. by Kevan.
100 points, ended October 30, 2008, 73 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Kind of not enough here to really hook me, but sounded intersting. Made me wonder who what where when how ...great job...best of luck
Rian -
Wow, very nice.
First one liner so far that doesn't go into paragraph length yet manages to catch you. I've read this story, btw. Found it very beautiful. ^^
-HT -
Very catchy. Something beautiful and tranquil in those words causes me as the reader to pay attention, because if you can impress me in that short of a period: you can impress me with your story for sure.
GOOD LUCK
Temaria
Blair
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Simple as that.
Good job. You made me want to read more with only ten words. Best of luck in my contest. I hope to read this once I get around to it.
xoxox
Kevan.
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