cemetary gates(chapter five)

alex reached the lot beside his querters, and dismounted the bike, turning it off as he did.  he walked inside,and shut the door quietly behind, not to wake the small form sleeping in his bed. he slid off the clothes,and sliped in beside her, wraping his arms around her and kissing her. he knew there would be hell to pay,but for tonight he didn't care. he clossed his eyes and fell asleep1

he awoke alone,or atleast thats what he thought when he opened his eyes. he rose, and looked around, seeing her get dressed and leave. he too dressed,and looked to see if anyone dropped new reports on his desk. it was bare. he walked outside,and toward the col. querters,when an explosion blew the door off a the armory and it struck him,knocking him unconcious.

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  • Elegant Inspirer
    September 27, 2008
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    Where are we going with this? I like it but where is it headed?