It was all an accident. A complete and utter accident. Looking back, I really hadn't planned on any of it happening. In fact, I can honestly say that I hadn't even planned on falling in love with him. It was an accidental fall. Or maybe it was love at first sight. Either way, it was not on purpose (though I doubt that falling is ever on purpose). When I finally realized I had fallen....I wasn't surprised at all. There was just something really special about him, that always kept me coming back for more. And I couldn't help but wonder if I was the ONLY person in the world who could see just how special he was.
Author notes
My story is called "Love Like a Rose"
A contest entry
- Hook Me. by Kevan.
100 points, ended October 30, 2008, 73 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Another intriguing summary. Great luck...again
Rian Dyiti
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Oooh, this is good. Very drawing-reader-in type. ^^ I'm intrigued by the hypothetic "he". XD
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I have to agree with Kevan.
You write in such a beautiful captivating way it just flows. There is no hiccups, no further questioning. I as a reader consume your every word, needing more.... needing to fill my mind with the enchanting words you have strung together to touch my heart and reel me in.
GOOD LUCK
Temaria
Blair
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Really enchanting and romantic. Yet, you have the reader wanting more. Hopefully I'll get a chance to check this one out.
Keep it up and good luck.
You write in a very captivating way.
Good luck in my contest!
xoxox.
Kevan.
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