Though, things still weren't perfect. Sometimes, memories from the past would cloud Luke's mind and he'd burst out crying, almost near hyperventilating as his shoulders shook uncontrollably. He hated that he couldn't forget his past. No matter what, the memories were etched into his mind, unwilling to allow him to move on. He hated talking, much less thinking about the past, and blew up at Noah whenever he questioned him about it. Eventually, Noah stopped trying to force Luke's past out of him. Instead, every time Luke started crying, Noah would embrace him tightly, cradling him until he fell asleep. All the while, Noah never stopped whispering soothing words in his ear. And Luke fell more and more in love with Noah every time.
Author notes
My story is called "Luke's Love"
A contest entry
- Hook Me. by Kevan.
100 points, ended October 30, 2008, 73 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Again, very intersting...not one line...but good. Brought the story together really nicely. Great job and again, good luck.
Rian -
One line...?
Ah well, regardless, I liked the part about his past, but didn't feel overly intrigued by the rest of it. -__- Might be as it's too romancy for me?
But it was well written for its own part.
-HT -
I love this kind of story.
It inspired my own story.
I just want to read it !!! I think I read this about this story somewhere else as well and loved it ^.^
I very much want to read it- so if given the chance send me the link please...
GOOD LUCK
Temaria
Blair
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"All the while, Noah never stopped whispering soothing words in his ear. And Luke fell more and more in love with Noah every time."
That was my favourite part. Great job. I want to read more. Keep entering. (:
You've got me hooked! Ahaha.
xoxox.
Kevan.
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