Through Glass.

The girl’s lilly white, shaved pussy had been pounded and fucked so hard that her most tender parts had turned an angry shade of red. The huge cock stuffed deep into her slick, tight heaven thrust harder and faster, making the girl moan and shriek into the bedcovers. 1

The pain fucking her cunt was unbareabley delicious, forcing her tiny little cunt back against the large, pulsating dick. She reached slowly under her slender, pale stomach and found her engorged clit, rubbing it as the cock slammed her against the bed over and over again.2

One of the man’s large hands grabbed her blonde hair, yanking her face back off where it had been being forced into a pillow. He pulled her up against his body, grinding his teeth down into her neck and circling her massive tits in his fists, pinching her nipples so hard she cried out in a thin, high-pitched wail. 3

He readjusted himself and shoved his huge, purple-viened dick into her again, bumping hard into the neck of her womb and almost bursting through into the forbidden reaches of her gorgeous, writhing body. 4

She was in heaven, the 12” dick so large it had to fight for entrance, and so thick that every single movement sent another spine-bowing orgasm through her body. She could feel his hot, panting breath on her neck, and his mumbled curses as she soaked his dick in her hot cum for what felt like the millionth time. 5

In the mirror infront of them, she could see him scratching his stubble over her pale skin, and his eyes blazing with a feirce, possesive blaze. She could feel and hear the slapping of his large balls as they bounced against her clit, adding to the pleasure her fingers were causing. 6

He swore and pressed his face into her neck, cock throbbing as he erupted inside her. The cum was hot and she let out a sigh as he emptied himself inside her, sluicing past his fat dick and further inside. He kept shooting and swearing, and she kept whimpering, loving the familiar feel of a humoguous cock shooting off inside her. 7

He shoved her away and she fell with a sluice off his dick onto her stomach, the white liquid trailing from the tip of his slowly deflating dick down to her used cunt. 8

The man gave his dick a few more half-hearted tugs, spraying the remaining cum over her rounded ass as she lay there, begging the oxygen around her for breath.9

The camera’s red light clicked once before the woman holding it switched it off. 10

The girl rolled off the bed and reached out for the white robe she was being offered, slipping it over her body, tying the knot tight and adjusting her sleak hair over the back of it. 11

She smiled at the cameramen (and woman) who were currently congragulating her, and tossed a small glance at the man who had just fucked her. He was on the other side of the room in his own robe, totally ignoring her as he was put through the same fanatic treatment. He meerly smirked at them and anounced he was dying for a cigertte, leaving the room followed by a select few others. The girl frowned, and then went back to her own admirers, brushing off his coldness as if it had never happened. 12

She was a professional porn star now, and she would have to live with the things that came with it. Somehow though, she thought the girl on the other side of the mirror wouldn’t have stood for it. 13

Author notes

-twitch-
Me?
Writing something straight?
Never.


My first attempt at anything straight, and my first attempt at writing erotica as such -.-


Songfic of Through Glass by Stone Sour.

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  • A.N. and A.L.
    October 24, 2008

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    Flawless. There is just no other word to describe your work to me. I am very glad that you found me so that I could read your stories. I'm wondering do you just do short stories? Or is there anything... more novel-ish? Something with a... second chapter perhaps? Your characters have so much growth within just a few paragraphs I'd love to see what you could do with something longer. ... (That was not meant to be dirty.)


  • Tarja
    September 28, 2008

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    I meant to read this yesterday but I was short on time. Well done as usual. For a first timer you did fabulously. Nicely done.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 27, 2008

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    I remember you sending this to me.
    Hot ...Hot...Hot...
    & it has a good story behind it.
    Something we can feel towards the girl..
    her life, her body, her emotions.
    BE PROUD

    I am proud of you =]


    Temaria - Blair


  • imagist
    September 27, 2008
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    wow. just... wow. I loved it. I loved it because you wrote it, because it was amazing, because it was dead on emotion and detail. And the fact that the title and song choice were both my personal favorite in song and artist, just made it somehow sweeter and... perfect. Fantastic job!