Stars Part 2

I said the password. The star couldn't go in because there were sensors for stars. So I bravely went in myself. The star kept saying to me before I came in: 'remember, bad stars are trickery' but they are forgetful sometimes. I didn't know what that meant but still, I kept that in my head.1

When I came in, I saw that there were loads of corridors, but I didn't know which one to take, I saw a sign pointing to one door so I went in. Oh no! It put me in a cell. I understood what the star said now.2

Finally, I saw an exit. I didn't trust it. I paced around, not knowing what to do. The walls were made of strong brick and the walls were about 10 metres tall. I knocked something and then I went into another room, not a cell. What a relief!3

It was just a plain, empty room with only one single book. It said on it: the big book of magic spells. I knew that was useful. I was hungry so I looked into the book. To have spaghetti  You have to say ono spaghettio. I said it and a plate of spaghetti came out. I slurped it down.4

I read a page saying: transport page. I read it and there was something which said: go to the meeting room. I guess it was the secret room because I saw the words faintly written which said: top secret. I believed in this book because the star said that they were sometimes forgetful.5

I read the spell and immediately, I was outside the meeting room. I put my ear against the door and heard low, hoarse voices saying 'ha-ha, the good stars will die and we shall rule'. I had to do something about it but what will I do?6

I thought about the magic book. Maybe, I could do some spells on them when they are discussing their things because they wouldn't do evil magic. I bet bad stars know evil magic. And that's when I had to battle with magic...

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  • patrickhschan
    November 18, 2008
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    oh good


  • Kirin
    September 27, 2008

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    Beautiful! A fitting second part. I'm eagerly waiting for the third part. The last para is a little confusing. Try to rewrite it. Also use spellchecking after writing your story. It will find out many mistakes. Good luck!! Write the third part soon