Paid In Full - Part 13 (Dark-Hunter Inspired)

Looking from Aiden, to the man standing behind her, and back, it took Fury a few moments to connect the significance of the name he’d been told. “That’s funny,” he said slowly. “He’s got the same last name as you.”1

“I’m her father,” Adlar snarled. 2

“But you were married,” Fury said, not quite getting it.3

“Pierce took my last name to avoid some problem with his past,” she explained. 4

“Fair enough,” Fury said, understanding the need to hide one’s past. He’d done basically the same thing when he first arrived at his current pack. “Look, how about grabbing a table so this can be discussed without attracting more attention than already.”5

“I don’t see where this is any of your business, wolf.”6

“Grab a seat, and I’ll tell you how it is.” 7

“I want you to leave.”8

“Yeah, and I want to stumble upon a bitch in heat just waiting to jump my bones, but I doubt I’ll find that here,” pausing, Fury glanced around just to make sure before continuing. “So I guess we both don’t get what we want.” 9

Amused and touched by Fury’s actions, Aiden took a seat, then looked pointedly at her father. Sighing in disgust, he sat, glaring at Fury as he took a chair opposite. 10

“Now,” Fury said easily. “Since I seem to be the table’s leading expert on fucked up family relations, I’ll…” he paused at the look Aiden gave him, “just sit here with my mouth shut.”11

“Wise idea,” Aiden said, wrinkling her nose at him. Hearing a sigh of disgust, she looked at Adlar. “What?” she demanded. 12

“A wolf?” He shook his head. “If your mother was here, she’d-“13

“Enough,” Aiden said, her voice low. “My choice of friends is not up for debate.”14

“After the way your mother died, I’m shocked and dismayed to find out that you’ve made friends with them.”15

“Sorry to disappoint you, Pops,” Aiden replied. “Maybe if you’d been around the past hundred years or so, you could have stopped me from traveling the path to ruin.”16

Fury snorted in amusement, then straightened at the look he got from both. “Sorry,” he muttered. Exhaling, he looked from father to daughter. “I give my word that none shall harm her when I’m around.”17

“Your kind will always do what is best for them,” Adlar sneered. “Your word as a wolf is useless.”18

“Perhaps,” Fury agreed with a nod. “But my word as Regis is pretty good.”19

“Regis?”20

“Fury Kattalakis,” Aiden said. “Katagaria Lykos Regis.” 21

Her father shook his head. “Let me get this straight, little one. You are friends not only with a wolf, but the Katagaria Regis?”22

“The Arcadian one, too,” Aiden added. “His brother, Vane.”23

Adlar shook his head at the changes that had happened while he was absent. “What about Savitar?”24

“What about me?” a voice said from behind. 25

Aiden had the pleasure of seeing annoyed fear in her father’s eyes before he turned to look at the Omegrion leader. “Savitar, I-“ He stopped as the god raised a finger.26

“Your input is not required at this moment,” Savitar said. He looked at Aiden. “Go ahead.”27

“I’m annoyed at you.”28

”I would imagine.”
29

“You knew he was alive.”30

Nodding, Savitar approached and looked down at her. “Your father left to protect his family,” he said. “It didn’t work the way he planned, but by staying away, he prevented the wolves from attacking again to get at him.”31

“He could have contacted me,” Aiden said, her voice sullen. 32

Reaching out to brush a few strands of hair from her face, he let his fingers linger for a moment, enjoying the sensation. “He gave you that odd sort of protection that only staying away can provide.”33

“Those years I was alone,” she whispered. “I needed family.”34

“You didn’t need him until now.”35

“Yes I did.”36

“Have you once, in the past one hundred years, called out for him?”37

”I didn’t know he was alive.”
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Savitar gave her a gentle, yet stern smile. “You knew your mother was dead, and yet you’ve called out for her through more than a few nightmares.” Reaching out to take her hand in his, he helped her to her feet. “You said you needed to find out what kind of eagle that you’ve shoved aside since your mother died.” He brought her hand up and placed over the eagle tattoo on his chest. “Although I can show you anything you want to know, your father is the one you need.”39

Giving her father a side-glance, Aiden contemplated her options. “If I go,” she said slowly, “what happens to us?”40

”I’ll always be here,” Savitar assured her as he fought the urge to hoist her in to his arms and whisk her back to Neratiti. “I’m never more than a thought away.”
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Placing her head on his chest just above her hand, she sighed. “Thank you.”42

That small gesture undid most of his resolve. Looking at the other two, he gave them a warning stare. “Be right back,” he said. “No harming or killing of each other.” 43

They watched as he vanished along with Aiden, then gave each other malicious glares. 44

Appearing in his bedroom on Neratiti, Aiden took a step back. “Sav?”45

“I need to be alone with you for a bit,” he said, studying her face. “Last time we were together, I left far too quickly. I refuse to allow that be my last time with you.” 46

“What about-“47

“They’ll be fine,” he assured her. “I’ll bring us back a minute or two after we left… long enough to get them thoroughly pissed at each other’s presence.”48

“You’re evil.”49

“And damn proud of it.” He snapped his fingers, making the room dim at the same time candles sprung to life at various points. Music surrounded them, the soft tones seemingly coming from everywhere. 50

Far Away,” Aiden said with a sad laugh, naming the song by Nickelback. “Somehow fitting.”51

Not wasting any time, Savitar gently grabbed her in an embrace, smiling as she took the initiative and dissolved their clothing. 52

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Angie walked from the stove to the counter, then back. Turning the burner off, she grabbed the small pan, poured the contents into the mug she had, then placed the pan on a cold burner. 55

“They staying?” she asked, not looking at Dom, but knowing he was standing in the doorway watching her. 56

“Up to you.”57

“Couple days, then,” she said as she picked up the mug of cocoa and walked to the door leading outside. 58

Dom watched as the door shut behind her. He knew she was going to sit at the small bistro table that was by the wall at the side of the house. Ever since she moved in, having a cup of hot cocoa as she sat there by herself was a small ritual she kept to. 59

Making her way to the small table, Angie settled in, took a sip of the drink, and placed it on the table. A noise from not too far away caught her attention and before fear could grip her, she recognized Tria’s voice. 60

Sighing in annoyance as the voices grew louder, she’d just stood when a person stepped around a rose bush. 61

“-be a pain in the-“ Paul stopped quickly when he realized they weren’t alone. “I’m sorry,” he said. “I didn’t know you were out here. Would you prefer to be alone?”62

Not used to politeness from him, Tria shot the eagle a suspicious look. She glanced at Angie, who seemed to be considering. 63

“It’s all right,” Angie said with a sigh as she lowered herself back to her seat. “I guess there are some things that I’ll have to put up with until after the baby is born.” She gave Paul a closer look. “Have we met before?”64

“Don’t think so.”65

“You look slightly familiar. Maybe in the café where…I …used….” Trailing off, she stared again, then realized why he looked familiar. 66

“Angie,” Tria said, stepping to her. “He had nothing to do with that.”67

Looking quickly to the side at that, Paul decided that maybe it was best to keep his little part in hunting Aiden to himself. Pain wasn’t something he was partial to, and that’s all he could see this ending up in if the truth came out. 68

“I’m want you both gone,” Angie said.69

“Be reasonable,” Tria said gently. “Dominic knows about Paul’s brothers, and-“ she stopped at the look on Angie’s face, and realized that maybe it wasn’t the right thing to say. “Paul won’t hurt you,” she finally ended up saying. 70

“Do you trust him?” Angie asked tightly. “Knowing what his brothers tried to do to you, do you trust your life, my life, and the life of an unborn child to him?”71

“Yes.”72

Paul’s head jerked in surprise at the reply.  Sure she trusted him… to screw up somehow and make a mess of things. He could sense her distrust and annoyance in him every time he got within ten feet of her. “Tria?” he asked. “Can I talk with Angie for a few minutes? Alone.” 73

Looking from Angie to Paul, then back, Tria was about to object because of the fear on Angie’s face. “I don’t think-“74

“I promise to be good,” he said, then looked at Angie. “There’s no way that I can make you trust me, but just talk with me for a few minutes, and when we’re done, I’ll leave if that’s what you decide.”75

“All right,” Angie said tightly. “I’ll listen, but if you try anything, I’ll make you a falsetto for the rest of your life.”76

“Tria,” he said, not taking his eyes off of Angie. He had no doubt that she would do as promised… pregnant females of any species were far deadlier than the males. “Go practice, or take a walk, or something.”77

“Jerk.”78

“Right back atcha.” Waiting until they were alone, he inclined his head to the empty chair. “Mind if I sit?”79

“Please do,” Angie said. “And keep your hands where I can see them.”80

He was about to laugh and tell her that he didn’t need his hands to do harm to her, but she seemed anxious enough already. Grabbing a seat, he placed his hands on the table, laced his fingers together, then suddenly found himself telling her things that he’d never uttered before to another living soul. 81

Trying to stop the words that were pouring out of him, he couldn’t, and somehow felt some sort of relief in the ability to unload pains that he never realized he had. 82

Angie listened, transfixed as he seemed to be telling her things he never intended to. She heard about his childhood, or what passed for it, and about the rivalry with his whole family since he seemed to be the only one that his grandmother ever liked. In a lot of ways, it was similar to any other tragic childhood she had heard or read about, but the inclusion of magick and time travel set it completely apart. 83

He went in to detail about his hunting of Labeve, and although he glossed over the grief of not getting her, Angie could feel the emotion in his voice every time he told her about arriving to find another life cut short. 84

Paul couldn’t believe that he was telling a human all these things, and really couldn’t believe that he’d told her that it was his idea to kill Aiden in the first place. He saw the anger and fear in her eyes, which didn’t dim when he told her about his decision to pull out not because of the fight with Liam, but because he’d changed his mind. Hell, he’d even put his life on the line by contacting Savitar to tell him about it… although the Omegrion mediator already knew the whole thing. 85

While talking, his mind flicked to the first time he’d ever met Acheron Parthenopaeus. Not long after wolves had attacked their patria, and more than a few eagles killed, a tall man arrived at their camp. He’d walked straight up to a barely one hundred year old Paul, and stared at him. Uncomfortable, Paul went to walk away when a hand gently stopped him. 86

“Hiding the pain does help,” the man told him. “Trust me, I know. But I’m told there comes a time when it won’t matter. You have to believe in that.” Annoyed at anyone that could see in to his mind, Paul had pulled his arm out of the grasp and stormed away.87

Damning Ash and his insights as he continued to talk, Paul wondered why fate had picked an obviously taken, pregnant human to be the one he spilled his guts to. He’d always assumed that the one who would spend eternity with him as a mate would be the lone person to get past the defenses he’d learned to build up. Hell, not even his grandmother knew about half the things he was saying.88

When he was finally done, he felt sick to his stomach, more tired than he had been in years, and just wanted to go see his grandmother so she could lift his spirits by telling him how much she loved and appreciated him. Trading stares with Angie, he waited while all the information sunk in. 89

“Okay,” she finally said. “You can stay.”90

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Giving a terse nod to Angelia, an Arcadian wolf that Aiden had introduced him to once, Fury pulled his attention back to the man sitting across from him. Great, the bar was just full of people tonight that hated him enough to want him dead…Angelia would gladly kick his ass for him, while he could sense intense anger coming at him from across the table. Knowing that Adlar would kill him had he not been in a safe house, Fury decided to annoy the hell out of him… a trait that he excelled at.93

“So,” Fury said, drawing the word out, “where’ve you been during the most important parts of your daughter’s life?”94

“Is that any of your business?”95

“I’m making it my business.” Leaning back, Fury gave him a stare that he usually reserved for those he was about to kill. “Kind of sad that your own daughter had to rely on someone like me when the shit hit the fan.”96

“Like what?” Adlar asked in a condescending tone.97

“Lemme see,” Fury said. “Probably best to start with her wonderful mate killing a lot of his own, then offering up Aiden to Strykerius for a sacrifice. Then maybe mention the eagles that tried to kill her, and…oh... can’t forget when the Spathi leader tried to get her the second time, and… well, I wasn’t there for the third attempt, but being declared exoristos was hard on her, and-“98

“What?” He was staring at the wolf with an expression of absolute disbelief. “You’re lying.” 99

“Wish I was, actually, but no. That’s been your daughters life for the past couple years.” Fury shrugged. “The exoristos rule was lifted, and since then, well…” 100

“No one told me.” 101

“Gee,” Fury said, leaning back even further. “And how many knew you were still alive?”102

“I was a little busy,” came the reply. “Trying to keep a pack of mangy wolves away from my family.” He gave a haughty look. “You’re probably with the pack that hunted me and killed her mother.”103

“Doubt it.”104

”How do you know? Do you remember every eagle you’ve killed?”
105

“If I had been hunting you,” Fury said easily, “you’d be dead by now.”106

“Big words for someone sitting in a sanctuary.”107

Scoffing heartily, Fury shook his head. “Whatever. Like I care what a chicken thinks of me.” 108

“A what?” came the dark reply. 109

“Chicken,” Fury said. “Cluck, cluck, cluck.” 110

“I saved my family by leaving,” Adlar said through clenched teeth as he entertained images of ramming a talon through the wolf and wiping that smirk off his face. 111

“A Were-Hunter's code is to die with honor.” Fury’s sneer grew. “Yet your mate is dead, and instead of having the decency to die with her, or your family, you took off, leaving your young ones alone to fend for themselves.” Fury shook his head. “Yeah, you’re a fucking hero.” 112

Adlar sprung to his feet and was halfway across the table before he remembered where her was. Giving Fury a killer glare, he returned to his seat. “You’re lucky, wolf,” he snarled. “If it wasn’t for Savitar’s rules, you’d be dead.”113

“Wow,” Fury said blandly. “I’m scared, no, really, honest. See me shaking in my seat?” Pausing to motion to the bar for a drink, he turned back. “I’m so afraid in fact, that I may start crying. I hope you’re happy.”114

“Why the hell is my daughter friends with you?”115

By the pissed off voice, Fury could tell that he’d reached, and maybe surpassed his goal to annoy. Thinking of an answer to the question asked, Fury had to admit to himself that he really didn’t know why they were friends. “Because I’m honest with her,” he finally said. 116

Taken slightly aback at the response, Adlar remained silent as the waitress brought Fury his drink. “Okay,” he said when they were alone again. “Regardless what anyone thinks of me, I can appreciate that answer.”117

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Sweat glistened on his back, the candlelight highlighting shadows to make his skin a few shades darker than usual. Running his hands from her thighs up over her back, Savitar massaged lightly, the sensation matching his gentle thrusts. Leaning over, he kissed one shoulder, trailing his lips over Aiden’s back to the other shoulder, then up to the nape of her neck. 120

Flicking his tongue lightly over her skin, and smiling at the reaction he was getting both from her moans and her magick crackling around them, his thrusts deepened as he placed hands on her hips. Moving back while still holding her, he continued until he was lying on his back. Pivoting so she could face him, Aiden leaned over to cover his lips with hers, moving in rhythm as she matched his movement perfectly. 121

Her mind swirled as he growled against her lips, and suddenly she was crying out as unbelievable ecstasy tore through her. Unable or even wanting to hold back, Savitar joined her, wrapping his arms tighter around her body as they both panted raggedly. 122

Trying to catch her breath as she laid on him, Aiden exhaled in pleasure. “That was,” she whispered, pausing to kiss him. “That was…”123

“Just the beginning,” he replied, taking her hand in his and lowering it between their bodies. 124

Smiling in bliss, Aiden pulled back slightly. “Hold that thought,” she whispered. “There’s something I’ve always wanted to try.”125

Unsure what that could be since they’d basically reenacted the entire Kama Sutra more than a few times in the past year together, Savitar gave her a curios look. “Should I be wary?” he asked as his hand massaged between her legs.126

Blinking in surprise, Savitar felt his shoulders leave the cushion of the floor, only to be almost immediately replaced by a smooth surface he knew so well. Smiling up at Aiden, he kissed the tip of her breast before looking at her. “Are you sure?” he asked.127

Leaning above his body as they laid on a surfboard being rocked by waves, Aiden nodded. “Just don’t let me fall in, and we’re fine.”128

“You’re safe with me,” he said, enjoying the soothing feel of the long board rocking, and the comfort of her above him. Although he’d never actually incorporated surfing and getting laid at the exact same time before, it seemed only natural to combine his two greatest talents. 129

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“What’s your game?” Tria asked.132

Giving her a confused look as they walked, Paul had no idea what she was talking about. “Uh, basketball?” he offered.133

“Not that, twit,” she said, exasperated. “I mean with the sudden politeness.”134

“I’m always polite,” he replied, hiding the smile he always got when she rose to his teasing. “Just not to you.”135

“Why not?” Tria asked, stopping. 136

Taking a few more steps, Paul stopped and turned. He could see the house from where he stood, and had to admit that it was impressive. “Because you’ve got attitude to spare, and you’re not willing to let anyone in to that little part of yourself that you’ve shut off from the world.” He turned and started walking again.137

“What?” Staring at his back, she imagined herself standing in front of him. 138

Without warning, Tria appeared in his path. With no time to stop, he stepped in to her, knocking both to the ground in a heap. “Fuck it, Tria,” he groaned in annoyance as he laid his head back on the ground.139

Jumping to her feet, she stared at him. “Guess I have to work on my timing.”140

“You think?”141

“You going to stay there all day?”142

Paul shrugged as he pulled his arms up to place behind his head as a cushion. “Sure. It’s a nice day. Why don’t you grab some grass and join me?”
143

“I don’t think that-“144

“Lay with me, Tria,” he said, his voice bordering on it being an order. “Stop being so damn tense.”145

“God, you’re a fucking jerk, you know that?” Crossing her arms over her chest, she glared at him. Before she could move, he twisted to the side, grabbed her legs, and hauled her to the grass. On her back, she stiffened as he placed one hand on either side of her and looked down. 146

“Relax,” he told her. “If there’s one thing I’ve learn in life it’s that you have to take a deep breath once in a while and do nothing but watch the clouds.”147

Images of her original death flashed through her mind, and she had to force herself not to react. “Please move back.”148

The fear in her voice made him quickly move. Still on the grass, he put a little distance between them, and ran a hand over his face. This was something he hadn’t expected… anger, sure… her being ready to knee him, definitely… but fear? 149

“I’m sorry,” he told her.
Standing, he walked to her, and held out his hand to help her to her feet. 150

Staring at his hand, she was tempted to swat it away. Instead, she took it and let him help her up. “Before Artemis offered me her deal,” she found herself saying, “I was brutally raped and murdered.”151

“Fuck,” Paul whispered, willing to kick his own ass for the way he acted. “I’m sorry for reminding you of that.” 152

“Yeah, well, I don’t talk about it, so I’d prefer it dropped.” She gave him a searing look. “Being the master of secrets, I’m sure you can relate.”153

“I’m far from the master,” he said, willing to allow her to pull him in to an argument; not that he needed any goading to fight with her. 154

“Oh, come on!” she scoffed. “You’re about as secretive as Ash, but with none of his charisma.” 155

“You’re comparing me to Ash?” he asked, confused. 156

“Someone gets a little close to actually finding out anything beyond your eye color, and you lash out,” she said. “Like when I mentioned your family.” 157

Annoyed at her ability to constantly reach his sore spot, he snarled, his pity for her gone. “Well, I’m about to make your point for you, darlin’.” Stepping back, he raked her with an impolite stare. “I have to go get something. Don’t leave these grounds. At all.”158

Before Tria could complain, he vanished; leaving her cursing the ground he was walking on. 159

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It was rare when he lost track of time, but that was exactly what Savitar did. So wrapped up in being with Aiden, he ignored all other things around him. He could hear Tria in his mind, requesting a meeting to discuss something. Ignoring it, he centered his attention on the woman with him. 162

By the time they were finished, nearly two days had passed for them. Knowing that he could return her to the moment they left was amusing, but part of him wanted to keep her with him. At the moment, Aiden was in the shower, cleaning up after their marathon session…washing away him. 163

Swallowing at that thought, he lay back on the bed and stared at the ceiling. They’d basically been all over the island, making love on any surface available, and every position imaginable…but taking her in his bed was his favorite spot. She’d been the only other person in history beside himself to lay on that surface, and to him that was very special.164

“You all right?”165

Eyes flicked to the voice, and he smiled briefly as she stood there, water glistening on her bare skin as she ran a towel through her hair. 166

Since he could see his own future once it was in motion, he knew just what his good intentions of sending her with her father would cost him. No wonder he tended to be a selfish bastard…it was far easier in the long run. “Just thinking of how much I’m going to miss you.” 167

Walking to the bed, she knelt on it while looking down at him. “This isn’t the end,” she told him. “I don’t want it to be, so… damn it, it won’t be.”168

The stubborn sincerity in her gaze made him hotter than hot for her… again. Not caring that he really should be just returning her to Adlar and Fury, he sat up, grabbing her arms and continued his arc as he gently forced her off the bed and to the floor. 169

Holding her hands above her, his head dipped down to nuzzle gently, as his knee nudged her thighs apart. 170

Closing her eyes as he slid in to her in one fluid motion, Aiden’s back arched at the sensation. Taking her hands in each of his, her arms were first stretched out to the sides, then brought close. Moving back slightly, Savitar brought both of their hands between their bodies, and placed his hands on the back of Aiden’s as he used her palms to caress her chest. 171

“Mmmm,” he moaned as he felt her hands move below his. Needing to be closer to her, he brought her hands back over her head, and placed as much of his body as he could on her. Kissing her neck, he suckled for a few moments as their tempo increased. He wasn’t into the biting, blood exchange thing like some other gods, but damn it, he loved the taste of her skin. 172

Moaning in delight as he gently nibbled her neck, Aiden raised her mouth to his ear. “I love you, Savitar.”173

There was just something about that uttered line that pushed him completely up and over any sort of thought of prolonging this experience. His eyes flashed an odd brown before his lips dove for hers, and he pushed against her, sensing the absolute delight that she experienced the moment he came. Her body bucked against his as she joined him, legs wrapping around his backside to pull him impossibly closer.174

“I love you,” he whispered as she pushed up against him. “And I don’t know if I can ever stop.”175

Wrapping her arms around his shoulders to pull him down, Aiden ran her fingers through his hair as she tried to catch her breath. “You keep doing that to me, and you won’t ever have to say goodbye.” 176

Although he wanted to remain in that position until the universe died, he knew he couldn’t. Too many dangers were coming, and he needed the security of knowing that she was safe, and gone from sight for a while. Out of his sight meant out of his enemies minds. 177

Feeling a peace that he hadn’t felt in…ever, Savitar closed his eyes in contentment. “We have to,” he said, then stopped. “We should…”178

“Yeah,” Aiden said, releasing him from her embrace. Using magick to clean herself this time, she quickly dressed and stood to look at him. 179

Fuck me, he thought bitterly. I hate this. Standing, he also dressed, then held his hand out for her. 180

Placing her hand in his, Aiden blinked as they were suddenly standing by the table they had left quite a while ago. Everything looked more or less the same, and she knew Savitar had kept his word to return them a few minutes after leaving. 181

Relieved that she was back so he could stop being polite, Fury stood from his seat. “I’ll miss you,” he said in a low voice as he leaned to give her a kiss on the cheek. Stopping before he made contact, he glanced at Savitar. 182

“Go ahead,” the surfer told him with a small shrug.183

Kissing Aiden lightly on the cheek, Fury pulled back. “Call me, okay?” 184

“Okay,” she whispered, trying not to cry. Fury had been a surprise friend, and one she knew she was going to miss.185

Giving Savitar a brief salute, the wolf turned to Adlar. He opened his mouth to say something, but decided to keep the comment to himself. Giving an annoyed shake of his head, he shoved his hands in to the pockets of his leather jacket, headed for the exit and walked out without a backward glance.186

Adlar stood slowly. “Ready to go?” he asked.187

Turning, Aiden wrapped her arms around Savitar, who returned the embrace. Kissing the top of her head, he worked his way down so he could capture her lips. 188

Staring in shock, Adlar couldn’t believe it. He’d suspected that something was up between his daughter and one of the most powerful beings he’d ever known, but somehow he’d convinced his mind that it was innocent. By the looks of the embrace the two were in, innocence had long since left the building. 189

Reluctantly pulling back, Savitar kissed her again briefly, then looked at her father. “You hurt her in any way, I’ll kill you.” 190

“She’ll be safe with me,” he replied warily.191

“See to it that she is,” Savitar said, then looked back at Aiden. “She’s a very important part of my existence, and I want her to remain as such.”192

I love you, Aiden thought, sending the message to the man who still held her. Regardless of the choices you make, I want you to always remember that.193

Hugging her tight, Savitar had to force himself to let her out of his embrace. “No goodbyes,” he said, taking a step back. 194

“No goodbyes,” Aiden agreed. 195

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  • Caradoc gold member
    May 10

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    Ack! Gone? Just like that?! No! They were so good together! And again I say, Tria and Paul. I can see it in my mind. You have to have written that, or are going to.

  • Cryptic-Haze
    December 4, 2008

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    He's her WHAT?
    Love the secenes between Adlar and Fury. Wolfie just loves to taunt whenever he can.

    Wait. Aiden's leaving? Just like that?

    Hmmm... Paul convinced Angie to let them stay.

    Angelia? The same one from Fury's story?
    "“I’m so afraid in fact, that I may start crying. I hope you’re happy.”"

    Ohhhh.... ahem... bedroom scene with Sav and Aiden.... not long enough! Youi need more sex in this story, damn it!

    I take that back. Love the next bedroom scene. But.. but...she's STILL leaving???

    . Rewarded 8


    • Barbara Moderators member
      December 5, 2008
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      Different Angelia. Just a weird conincidence.

      Yes, she's leaving.


  • DuBaen
    September 29, 2008

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    Great, as always

    In line 55, the line starts out with "Aiden ..." I think you might have meant Angie. Other than that, pretty damn good!

    . Rewarded 4


    • Barbara Moderators member
      September 29, 2008
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      I meant the one following the next chapter....


    • Barbara Moderators member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thanks! it's all those 'A' names Yes, Angie... I read that three times today, and didn't notice...

      thanks Hopefully I won't disappoint in the next chapter (since the one following is only half done)

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