prompt request for contest...

hey, just checking in, letting you know i'm still alive.

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this is just a prompt request for a contest i entered.

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  • Eternalsyn16
    September 27, 2008
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    thanks. i'll get on that now, but i might now finish for a while. i'll do my best to get it done on time...

  • Ssmm
    September 26, 2008

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    alrighty then. brace for impact, here comes the prompt:

    alright, i'm going to throw you a little bit of a bone, in that your main character is a mute, which is kind of up your alley.

    and now i'm going to (figuratively) take a baseball bat to your melodramatically tragic knees. because your main character is also a rogue on a vendetta. he's going after the scum of the earth, cleaning up the streets, etc. he does this by going undercover, masquerading as a criminal during the day, and killing his coworkers by night. sounds dark, but he's got a great work ethic and he's very cheerful. i want this first person, lots of introspection as this guy, lots of sarcasm.

  • Ssmm
    September 26, 2008
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    alright, i'm considering. i'll get you a prompt by tonight