S R Murder--27

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Silent Radio Murders2

By Andy Stephenson and Geri Fitzsimmons3

Chapter twenty-seven 4

Joseph Farley pulled into a parking lot behind the remodeled Brownstone in the Upper Eastside. The first floor held the sedate offices where Neil Harris catered to his private patients. Trimmed in maple, the subdued tones of greenish-whites and marble provided an affluent but tranquil environment for those who could afford thousands of dollars to indulge their passion for self-pity. 5

Joe liked to tease Neil about this pampered clientele. Still, he respected the physiatrist who took time from his lucrative practice, to volunteer in clinics in the poorer sections of the city—even a few hours weekly at Belleview. 6

The second and third floors of the Brownstone were remodeled into a single-family living space. The bottom floor of the arrangement had lost all the individual rooms, except for several toilet areas, and become one gigantic Great room. It harbored a restaurant size kitchen and dinning space for thirty that flowed unbroken into varying size conversation clusters. 7

Neil had turned the top floor into more personal quarters. There were two guest suites but the rest of floor plan catered to him. Often a guest here, Joe punched in the code that gave him access first to the garage and then the elevator to the third floor.8

Quite unlike him, as Neil Harris was as predictable as a Swiss watch, Joe Farley watched him hurry across the room still clothed in pajamas and robe. It was nearly nine o clock, normally the Doc would be dressed and getting ready to leave for the evening. This was an unexpected break in schedule like the phone call Joe received from Neil an hour ago. The same call that brought Joe to his friend’s home at this unexpected hour on Monday night.9

The normally composed psychiatrist was obviously agitated by something. He swung and tossed his laptop so it landed on an overstuffed leather lounge. Then he grabbed it up again and held it against his chest as if in apology for the abuse. He stared at Joe over the top of the machine and his eyes showed red streaks—he blinked. He mumbled, “nearly impossible to catch.”10

“Got something for me, Doc?” asked Joe as he continued to monitor his friend’s unusual behavior. “Maybe I should brew some coffee?”11

“Pour me a scotch—you can join me.” Neil set his laptop on the coffee table and flipped it open to a screen he’d been working on. He slumped heavily into the chair. He waited as Joe made their drinks at the wet bar and returned to sit in the marching sofa across from him.12

Neil rarely indulged in alcohol before going to the studio, a beer perhaps but that was it, so the request for scotch made Joe remark, “You’re not on tonight?”13

“They’re splicing together some older sessions and putting together a show. It’s radio so my missing face won’t be noticed.” He took a swig of the White Label nearly emptying the glass. “I just couldn’t…” His voice cracked slightly.14

He turned the computer screen towards Joe. “Take your time,” he said. Emptied his glass then got up and went to the wet bar, returning with the Durr’s bottle.15

Reading down from the top of the first page, Joe could see that the Doc had provided a list of supposedly know facts about serial killers such as; 85% male—8% female—7% undetermined sex because the killers are still at large.16

Age range is from twenty-two to fifty with 87% loners while app. 10% hunt in pairs or packs.17

Detective Farley already knew a lot of this or had his own access to such info, so he scanned several screens full and then came to a subtitle. Goal Oriented:18

Beneath it Neil had typed his opinions almost in journal form for apparently he’d been motivated to get as much down as he could in a short time. 19

This killer wants to achieve a certain result from his murders. For some reason he has deemed his victims worthless. It is his desire to rid the world of a certain type of person—normally it is females he determines to be guilty of sexual misconduct. If a woman were to simply dress or act provocatively she could become his victim. Of course that is not to say he couldn’t be incensed by something non-sexual.20

The Goal Oriented Serial killer has an obsessive-compulsive mind-set that could be rooted in psychosexual problems, but he is neither delusional nor insane. The crime scenes, the method used will differ but the victim’s resemblance in some way will be the same. He normally commits the murder and abandons the body at the same location. He is proud of his act and doesn’t attempt to hide it. In fact he likely thinks of himself as a hero.21

“He believes he is out to rid society of a disease?” Joe remarked. He picked up his own drink and sampled it as Neil finished off his second and started to pour a third.22

Joe sat patiently, lit a Salem in the one indoor place where Joe could enjoy a smoke, and waited.23

Neil was obviously framing his answer with care. “This guy's a piece of work. He chooses young women of similar age, size, and hair color. This suggests to me that there was a traumatic experience with a woman of a similar description. He takes it out on the women he's victimizing.” 24

“His mother?”25

“Could be but not always. Mommy Dearest often gets and deserves the rap. But remember young males are not only easily stimulated sexually but also emotionally motivated—it is what makes them pliable. Excellent fodder for training; often insecure, even the most athletic and popular, hasn’t yet developed a strong sense of self worth. Young ladies they are sexually attracted to, they believe they are in love with. So they can be hurt but society has convinced them they shouldn’t allow themselves to show it.”26

“So our killer got dumped and decided any girl that resembled that broad should be done away with?”27

“Nothing is ever that simple with a human being, Joe.”28

“Jesus! I hope not or New York is going to have a shortage of Brunettes.”29

“He may not be our problem much longer. If we don’t uncover him soon—he’ll be gone.”30

Joe reached for the Durr’s and refilled his now empty glass. “Bastard isn’t new at this?”31

“I’d estimate this is at least his second or third hunting ground. Could have been even more. The type of killer you’re after isn’t interested in gaining fame or tormenting police, and will usually do his deed in remote areas. Sometimes his victims aren’t located for years. When he begins to feel threatened in one place he will leave and take up his task in another area.32

"For some reason this particular killer is drawn to city life. Perhaps it’s just New York’s glamour? Could be employment. Something has relocated him and is keeping him here but it won’t hold him forever. Every kill puts him one step closer to departure.”33

“I want this son of a bitch!” Joe punched the couch. “You have to help me get him before he makes that last kill.”34

“He may already have done it.”35

“What makes you say that?”36

“This morning a young woman matching the killer’s victim’s profile was found knifed in her apartment--Renee Weinberg.”37

“Knifed? Sounds more like a rage killing—our perp’s a smooth operator.”38

“Not necessarily, Joe. Do you remember a Pamela Murray’s death in February? You’re the one who included the information on her with the other cases. Of course you didn’t provide a name, so I went into the News online files. The News of course hasn’t gone into details about Renee’s death as yet; but since Pamela’s death is old news the public now knows she was literally ripped apart from groin to throat." 39

“One of the detectives found several links—besides age and appearance, Pamela fit some of the other criteria. Like placing a call to your show.”40

“And so I believe did Renee Weinberg.”41

“You’re certain about that?”42

“Joe. So certain I’m sitting here getting drunk. A Renee called the show a few weeks ago—shortly after Michelle Baine was killed. I took the call. I’ll never forget her words. ‘New York is so stifling, so many people but I’m invisible to them. I’m alone.’ “, Neil gagged slightly as if the Renee’s words coming from his throat choked him. He took another long drink of scotch before he continued. “Joe, damn it I told her I’d listen. But I didn’t. Mark switched the call to the Crises line—now she’s dead.“43

“Don’t start beating yourself up,” Joe said. “I’ll check into the Weinberg case. I’m going to check further on that prick Gheil—something you said.“ He stood and tapped Neil on the forehead. “Something brought our Killer to New York. A job—maybe? Gheil came from LA a year ago. Your show first aired in December, the traceable murders started a month after that.”44

Joe’s cell phone, with the ringer off, began to vibrate in his pocket. He retrieved it and glanced at the incoming number then cursed, “shit,” under his breath. “Nearly a eleven? What hell does she want?”45

“You might better find out,” Neil shrugged. “Something could be wrong with Becca.”46

“Shit,” Joe hissed again. “Yah,” he said into the phone preparing himself for his ex-wife’s whine. 47

Instead, “Hi Daddy,” came the excited voice of his daughter as she bubbled over. “Mommy wants me to come up on Sunday. She says I can stay longer.”48

Surprised, Joe didn't immediately respond.49

“Daddy?”50

“What are you doing up this late?”51

“I was watching a movie with Gramps. I’m out of school yah know. When Mommy came home we started planning and then decided…it's okay, isn't it?” Disappointed began to creep into her tone.52

“It’s great!” he said, trying to put the appropriate enthusiasm in his voice. “Yes, Honeybunch, I can't wait” This development had taken him by surprise. He was deeply involved in this case and he wasn't quite prepared for his child's early arrival.53

“I'll be so glad to get there. I'll get to see all my friends again.”54

“What about me?” asked Joe pretending hurt.55

“You know I've been dying to be back with you. Everybody's so strict here.”56

“You'll have to follow the rules here, too. You'll be spending a lot of time with your aunts, you'll have to do what they ask.”57

“Yes, Daddy,” said Becca with exaggerated contriteness. 58

“Do you know when your flight will arrive?”59

“Mommy will tell you. I have ta go to bed,” came the sulky complaint.60

“Let me speak with your mother. Love you, Pumpkin.”61

“Love you, Daddy.”62

There was an exchange of words he couldn't make out and then Rose came on the line with the announcment, “She's gone into her room.”63

“So what's up?”64

“I got to thinking, and I felt that it wouldn't hurt if she spent a little more time with you,” said Rose.65

“I don't buy that for a minute,” said Joe, his anger building.66

“It's the truth. Or maybe you don’t want her? “ she sneered, “That would figure.”67

“Of course I want her,” said Joe, angered more that she was trying to hit him with a guilt trip.68

“Then you ought to be happy about the change,” said Rose with false cheerfulness. “I was thinking that she might stay until school starts.”69

“Why? Has she become an inconvenience all of a sudden?” asked Joe, suspiciously. 70

“You know better than that. I just want her to spend as much time as she can with you—so she wont be sniffling about missing her daddy.”71

“You're full of shit,” said Joe. He took a stab in the dark. “I'll bet you've got yourself a guy? What? He doesn't want your kid in the way?” Silence greeted him. “So you have got a new guy?”72

“Is there a reason I shouldn't?” she asked defensively. “We are taking a cruise and I need to settle Becca before we leave.”73

“Fine. I could care less what you do. What time will her flight be in?”74

He flipped his phone shut as soon as she finished. “My kid will be here for six to eight weeks instead of four. Her arrival time at JFK is 1pm Sunday.” He shrugged and slumped back in his seat. “Think I can use another drink.”75

“Stay the night. You can use the desktop—we can work a few more hours. I’ve been scanning news stores in other parts of New York and her surrounding states for similar murder cases or missing women in the past five years…found a match right next door. South Jersey’s got two missing who fit the description and one dead-- that one was only sixteen.” 76

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  • condor gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    This was a very busy chapter with lots going on, and i enjoyed every minute of it. Neil is certainly wound up. I guess he figures that this killer is going to be a big problem for them to deal with. I love the way you have him almost hyperventilating with anger and worry. That was wonderful. I can see him and Joe sitting there while they discuss this and how joe is contemplating his friends change of behaviour. Sounds like a tricky situation for you two to get out of, but then again, you guys have the knack for that. The little daughter is a sweet addition to the story. Sometimes i see movies where they annoy you for being in the way when something profound is happening and wonder why the writers put a kid there, but in a book, it sits wonderfully. I really can't stand his ex. If i were him, i would be a little pissed off the way she is shoving the kid onto him just because she has a bloke around. She's entitled to a relationship, but not to throw the kid away like a piece of garbage, and that is what it sounds like. I also like the way you continued on after the telephone conversation. A couple of minor errors i picked up.

    paragrapgh 45/2 Nearly a eleven, what hell does she want?
    (I think this paragraph needs seeing to).

    paragrapg 74....Replace could with couldn't.( He doesn't give a damn.)

    Well done guys.

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      October 19, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting .

      Neil of course is like Joe a very moral guy. He feels guilty that he allows the Radio Station to use his title to draw listeners and make advertising bucks, but won’t give him an opportunity to help the ones that really need it.

      Already beating himself up over Michelle’s death, something he couldn’t have prevented, he recognizes the name Renee; again he couldn’t have prevented her murder unless he’d been able to recognize a pattern sooner. But that knowledge doesn’t help to ease his feeling that he’d betrayed Renee.

      Since Neil and Joe sort of share center stage with the killer, we need to come up with a title that reflects the kind of men they are.

      Becca is going to burst on the scene shortly .

      Geri


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      October 18, 2008
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      Hi

      Becca is a fun addition to Joe's life, which is a bit complicated, but he is the central character of the story aside from the killer and the hunt for him.

      The story is developing well, I think. I'm very glad you like this chapter. Thanks for all the applause.

      Andy

  • fhsbernard
    October 16, 2008
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    Good story! I really liked it,I'm really into stories like this one but I liked it


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thanks for dropping in and reading this chapter. You have come in at the last half. If you'd like to see how it begins, let us know. Welcome to Storywrite. Please also let us know if we may be of any assistance.

      Andy

  • Luckyk
    October 12, 2008

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    How will this change affect the case or can they wrap it up before...So much drama so little time...MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      October 12, 2008
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      lots of questions--we love that it means we are doing our job. When there are no more questions the story is over. This book has been a lot of fun to write--odd to say 'fun' about a murder mystery but it has.

      One of the reasons is all the loyal 'Critters' who have kept us working, by helping with their corrections and comments.

      Thanks again for continuing to follow the story and comment.

      Geri

  • NosferatuWoman
    October 1, 2008

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    16 as: instead of as;
    17 app. I think you should spell it out or else use itallics or indentations or something to show that he is reading off of the notes on the computer.

    Those were the only two things that slowed down my reading. Everything flowed nicely. Your imagery was excellent and your attention to detail gave it great depth. Dialog was flowing well and was believable.
    Really great write!

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      October 2, 2008
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      Hi and thanks for reading and commenting. You made a couple of good catches that we will use in the next draft.

      I'm a little behind this week--have to blame it on this rotten headcold.

      With Brooke so speedy I can't hope to catch up. But I will make it up to you.

      Geri


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      October 1, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thanks for dropping in on our story. I hope you'll come back for more. In my copy of this chapter, I put the computer part in italics. I'm glad you like this chapter.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Andy

  • PamelaP
    September 30, 2008

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    Very Good

    Although I haven't read the other chapters to this, I found it very good. I could already picture the characters, and I liked the dialogue between father/daughter,wife. Can't wait for the next installment.

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      October 2, 2008
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      Pam, thanks for reading and commenting, I've been a bit this week and it's put me behind.

      We are glad to see you are enjoying the story and hope you will continute to.

      Geri


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thanks for reading and commenting. We're very pleased that you like this chapter. If you'd like to pick it up at the beginning, here's the link to the list of chapters:

      http://storywrite.com/list/34946-Secret-Radio-Murders

      Thanks again for reading.

      Andy

  • eyeambaldman
    September 29, 2008

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    'graph 6: physiatrist? Do you mean psychiatrist?

    'graph 12: sit in the (matching) sofa across

    'graph 16: supposedly know(n) facts about

    'graph 52: (Disappointment) began to creep into her tone.

    'graph 76: news stor(i)es in other parts of New York

    Holy shitballs, this is gonna get wicked. Could it be that Becca could become a target of our killer? Ooooh..that would be quite interesting...dammit, I'm still clueless on who the killer is, but the story is just so damn suspenseful, I wanna keep reading!

    This is an excellent chapter, guys! Neil is finally starting to help in the process and Joe's life is about to get more complicated! Can't wait to see where this goes...plotting so far is superb.

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      September 30, 2008
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      Morning Phil thanks for reading and picking up those goofs .

      We are glad that you approve of the twists in the plot. We certainly want the story to entertain from chapter one on through without giving away the end. I hate it when all the fun things happen in the first few chapters and the story dries up until the end chapters.

      Hmmm is the killer going after Becca? (you did catch the subtle hint.) The reason it’s understated is I’m not sure we will use the idea. She’s a bit young to attract this killer—but we’ll see. It's there if Andy wants to use it

      Geri


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      September 30, 2008
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      Hi Phil

      There is no telling what we might do. Geri and I often have no idea what the other is going to come up with. Occasionally we disagree. I think it makes for a better story.

      Thanks for pointing out our errors and for reading, commenting, and all the applause.

      Andy


  • Abstract Muse silver member
    September 27, 2008

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    p6. this - 'this' or 'his'?

    p16. know - known

    p45. Nearly 'at' eleven, What 'the' hell does...

    p53. ..., I can't wait '.'

    Now we're getting somewhere. I figured Neil would come up with something to go on. He seems to feel he has something as well. I was always kinda suspicious of Gheil. Hmm.

    Becca coming for a longer stay at this particular time may put a bit of a distraction on Joe. Good thing he has other people to keep an eye on her.

    Jersey sounds familiar to me for some reason. Was that mentioned earlier in the story?

    Nice informative chapter here. Renee's death did spark something for Neil and once again the crisis line and Gheil are involved.
    I'm looking forward to what the next chapter shows us.
    Bring it on!
    Greg

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    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      September 28, 2008
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      ‘morning Greg, as always we appreciate your reading and commenting.

      You got going early this week

      Jersey is mentioned a couple of times in the earlier chapters. There are an awful lot of New York, New Jersey commuters. Mostly they live in Jersey and work in New York City. Of course I lived in Ocean City, NJ and worked in NYC for a while. That's why I'm up at 3AM.

      You approve of Neil’s profile . We wanted the reader to be able to understand it—too often when you get into physic jargon, the average person just shakes their head .

      Thanks for finding our goofs.

      Remember if you want to guess the killer send it in an IM.

      Geri


    • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
      September 27, 2008
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      Hi Greg.

      Neil and Joe make a good team as well as good friends. Becca and Sandy are both apt to distract Joe. I think that he'll be able to handle it.

      Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause.

      Andy

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