Life

Love begins, while bullets end.

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  • Tiger-Lily
    October 26, 2008

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    Hm...as in, love/happiness starts when troubles end?

    My mind is like half-dead at the moment, so can't quite grasp whatever profound message you have there. x__x *needs caffeine*

    But I get a gist and I like it. XD

    -HT

  • Kay Tagohna
    October 2, 2008

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    Ok so I just told you this five minutes ago. Why are you making me type it? >.<

    I think it means that love begins, which is when you actually start to live life and its ended quickly by a break up, finding out the love was never really there and people get crushed by the 'bullets' of a break up.

    There...my lame take on it.

  • Stryke Greeters member
    October 1, 2008

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    ??? Clueless here. Wish i could figure out what it means. ??

    Great wording though...


    Rian

  • KitterBean
    September 29, 2008

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    Sorry, but i just didn't get this...i wish i did because it really sounds brilliant. excellant job!

    Cat

  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 26, 2008

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    interesting, I think there's some deeper meaning here, it's very powerful, I love it, great job =DD and good luck =DD

    -Dani

  • moonwriter
    September 25, 2008

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    Very interesting. As always. I'm going to be thinking on this one (trying to figure it out) all night. Amazing.

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